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Post November 22nd, 2017, 12:20 am

The Best

I will upload a small and fluff story. Every day a new short chapter. Have fun.

Hair

“She has the best hair!” James claimed on their third day in Hogwarts. “It’s so bright and red! Like a signal fire!”
Peter looked relieved and Sirius nodded, while Remus mumbled an agreement. The four eleven year old boys were lost. Truly, horrible lost in the castle. They had been on the way to the next class, when a stair changed direction and then they were wandering around the corridors in hope to find anything or anyone that could lead the way. Peter had tears in his eyes and James felt nearly as frustrated.

But then, he had caught a glimpse of Lily Evans’ red hair around a corner. The boys did not know all of their classmates yet, but James recognized the fiery red hair from his fellow Gryffindor. He had poked Sirius in the ribs and whispered to him. All four of them ran to the corner where he had seen her, just in time to see her turn another corner. They followed her in this fashion until they reached the potions classroom, where James then announced his admiration for her hair. Her hair was not only bright and red, but shiny and wavy and looked very soft.

Later that day, he found out that trying to touch that hair with jam-sticky hands was considered pulling hair.

James was sure of it. Lily Evans had the best hair.
A Thaum is the basic unit of magical strength. It has been universally established as the amount of magic needed to create one small white pigeon or three normal-sized billiard balls.
chaos is found in greatest abundance wherever order is being sought. It always defeats order, because it is better organized
~ Terry Pratchett
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Post November 22nd, 2017, 3:50 am

Re: The Best

James is actually a stalker of Lily in that story, lol, yet they got married in the end, lol. :) Love triumphs all, I guess, lol. :)
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Post November 24th, 2017, 11:25 am

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Eyes

"She has the best eyes." James thought when he stared spellbound at her. She had her hands in her hips and glared up at him. He and Sirius had only played a small prank on Snivellus and she had stormed over to shout at them. They had just transformed the snake on his crest into a floppy worm, because really it was less embarrassing. They were practically doing him a favour.

Her eyes were very green and when she was angry they were dancing. The flush on her face made them stand out even more. Their corners were pulled up slightly like a cat. They were big and for some reason her eyelashes weren't red like her hair, but dark and long.

She stared at him, as if she expected him to say something. Had she asked him something?

"Eh what?" He wanted to answer her. He really wanted to. He just needed to know the question.

"Urrg." She groaned and rolled her eyes. Even while doing this they looked pretty.

She turned around to walk away from him and James felt he lost something when her eyes were no longer on him. She grabbed Snivillus' arm and pulled him with her.

"Hey Evans!" He shouted after her. She looked over her shoulder and her green eyes were on him again. He didn't know what to say now. She raised her eyebrows at him. He had to say something! "Don't you know that you will get bitten when you hang out with snakes?"

It looked like her green eyes caught fire, before she stormed away.

He would continue to do many stupid things to have her eyes back on him. But it was worth it.

James was sure of it. Lily Evans had the best eyes.
A Thaum is the basic unit of magical strength. It has been universally established as the amount of magic needed to create one small white pigeon or three normal-sized billiard balls.
chaos is found in greatest abundance wherever order is being sought. It always defeats order, because it is better organized
~ Terry Pratchett
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Post December 16th, 2017, 7:36 am

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Thank you so much It is a very fun story. I'm waiting for you

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