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****Prepare for a long read****

After the final chapter (not the epilogue) it cuts forward 3 months after the events. Harry Ron and Hermione are attending a huge funeral for all those who died. Mr + Mrs Weasley are there. Ginny is there. George is there (harry used the elder wand to give an ear or something, im srry i just cant stand the fact that he has no ear) basically everybody from Hogwarts and many from around the wizarding world is there

The service goes on and of course the new minister of magic (who is leading the event) wants to thank Harry.

Harry embarrassed walks up to where the minister was standing and everybody is cheering.

Harry then makes some speech bout how he didnt want all the credit since so many helped him fight the army.

After the speech The trio, ginny, neville, and luna are walking round talking bout stuff saying how they think the world is gonna change.

After that cut to another part of the chapter. They are at the trial of many of the death eaters. They watch alot of them go to the new improved (by improved i just mean fixed) Azkaban. Draco is next for trial. Harry's eyes meet Dracos. The judge deems that Draco serves 15 years as he didnt kill anyone (did he??) but conspired.

*New Chapter ,4 yrs later*
Harry is dressed in a tux is walking towards a tent when a group of say 5 ppl came running towards him asking for an autograph. Harry is now a pro quidditch player (I know didnt see that coming
Razz

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After he signs the autographs Harry walks into a tent where ron is sitting alone.
Ron asks Harry "is it scary up on the altar??"
harry asks "What"
Ron: 'Well when u married Ginny a bit back, and u had to stand on the altar saying those vows were u scared
Harry just laughs causing Ron to laugh to. They start talking bout their old adventures. Ron starts talking with a more serious tone
Ron: "harry u know in our fourth year when i was mad at u for having ur name in the Goblet of fire?"
Harry: "Ya"
Ron then explains that he thought herminone would like some one famous instead of Ron himself. and explained thats what happened most of the times he was mad at HArry.

Harry then tells Ron bout how if Ron hadn't sacrificed himself on the chest board in their 1st year they might had not lived. Also bout how when Harry nearly drowned during their travels that he wouldnt even had killed Voldemort. And how Ron is a huge head figure at the ministry of magic (not the minister but Ron is still a big figure known by all) and how hes going to marry one of the top Aurors in the world who has created a book consisting of self made spells and potions(hermione)
ROn still seems upset
HArry then reminds his friend, how Ron took the beating from the Snatchers and Bellatrix in order to try and save hermione. How that showed more love for her than nebody else could have. They smiled shake hands and whatnot and HArry exits the tent.

Harry then is pulled aside by Hermione. And they begin to talk bout the adventures of the trio also. During the talk HArry is recalling the first horcrux (in Book 7) and how Ron destroyed it when he stabbed it. Harry accidentally starts to talk bout what the Horcrux had said to Ron. Hermione is a bit taken ack from it, but still remains cool. She said that she had liked Ron since their second year.
Hermione also says that she still doesnt know y she was put in Gryffindor becuz she is more smart than brave, so she should have been in Ravenclaw.
Harry doesnt really know y but he says prolly cuz it was destiny. Harry then exits hermione's tent.

Harry accidentally on Neville who seems to be on one knee holding something out to a girl (maybe Luna im not sure) Harry smiles at neville and quietly leaves, when Ginny comes kisses Harry and says time to be at the alter.

George is seemingly (fake) crying. and says "Nobody expected that Holey would live to see his younger brother get married.

They all head to the alter where ron is already standing. After bout 5 mins Hermione accompanied by her Dad (she got her parents back) are walking up the aisle Ron smiles at Herimione.

The priest than starts the usual wedding routine. When Ron starts talking.

Ron says how hes loved her since their 3rd year and different stuff like that

Herimione says that she loved him since their 2nd year and stuff like that.

After the vows they kiss and walk down the aisle together.

*Then the next chapter should be the Real Epilogue*

How do u think it shouldve ended????

Plz comment on my ending idea i know that its not actually the way i wouldve written it but its a brief overview. Thanx

Posts: 28373 · Posted: July 22, 2007 3:56 pm Post subject:

hmmm... i like my fanfic version although i doubt many would like it coz its not a grand battle scene... just a quiet one...
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^^^^im gonna check that out

Posts: 105 · Posted: July 25, 2007 10:34 am Post subject:

I would just like a long battle scene between harry and voldy.

Leave in the first spells, but have voldemort avoid the backfire. Pocket the elder wand and use his yew wand. Then let the epic battle proceed that makes the crowd run for their lives and levels the castle to ruin. I know Jo would never let Harry do the Avada Kerdavra, so have neville throw him the sword of Gryffindor when it looks like neither can destroy the other and to paraphrase Waterboy "cut Voldemort's f*****g head off." or stab him in the chest. Just something a little more that makes the fight seem grand and not easily won as it actually was in the book.

Then not rush through the ending scene and have a little more than Harry waiting to go to bed. Explain some of the battle that we miss out on (deaths, etc...) and even though I hate shipping, Harry and Ginny have to talk before the epilogue.

Epilogue needs to be reworked to explain a lot more of what happens in the time that passes and who is where and what they are doing and not leave it for a stupid encyclopedia.

Oh and make the last sentence back to the way it was originally with Scar as the last word. Get rid of that stupid freakin "All is well" crap.
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i think Fred would be alive and i'd have it said that Luna and Neville got together and married and while he's at Hogwarts teaching she's off leading expeditions to find new creatures. other than that i LOVED how it ended in the book...
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Posts: 42 · Joined: Jul 25, 2007 Posts: 42

i liked that ending

Posts: 28373 · Posted: July 25, 2007 12:04 pm Post subject:

harry should have died.
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i don't think many people would have liked it if Harry died.. I expected it but the way it ended was somewhat how i pictured the hole thing..
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Ok Maybe I'm too old but "shipping" what does that mean? Smile

Posts: 7080 · Posted: July 25, 2007 1:47 pm Post subject:

I think voldermort should have given up and listened to harry and then to pay for what he has done help rebuild the world
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Posts: 96 · Joined: Jul 12, 2007 Posts: 96

that would be way to corny

Posts: 7080 · Posted: July 25, 2007 2:13 pm Post subject:

I wasnt done yet...lol I was cooking :O ill finish my End later
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