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How Severus should have died.

 
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Severus
Muggle
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PostPosted: August 27, 2007 6:59 am    Post subject: How Severus should have died. Reply with quote
http://jazzy3113.blogspot.com/

Be kind, I write alot but this is the first time I have written Harry Potter story.
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Icefire
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Location: Biding my time until I see him again....
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PostPosted: August 27, 2007 10:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
hey, that was interesting. I like the way you write, you're very descriptive. But, ah, are you adding onto the end how Harry got the memory from Snape? About how he had to die?
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Severus
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PostPosted: August 27, 2007 3:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
I did not like the way Snape died, but for Harry to ever believe Snape and have everything explained I think the pensive was the best strategy. So instead of having Nagini kill Snape and Harry grabbing the memories from air, I wrote it differently and then had him die in the Hall.

This would have replaced the end of the chatper "The Elder Wand" and altered the Bellatrix fight, that's all.
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