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KrazyMan
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PostPosted: July 11, 2008 3:54 pm    Post subject: Will you marry me? Reply with quote

I haven't got much time now so this is just going to be a brief start to my fan-fic. I will update it.

This will also be in 2 parts.

It has been 5 years since the war at Hogwarts ended and He-who-must-not-be-name was killed. Harry Potter and Ginny Weasley have since become a couple and are soon to be celebrating their 4 year anniversary. Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger will son spend their 5 year anniversary.

PART ONE

"Mum, it's not as if I'm leaving for ever, I'm moving in with the love of my life. I'll visit you every day. You let Ron move away 2 years ago and he didn't have this problem..." Ginny's voice tailed off as her mother walked away from her. Molly Weasley was still so over-protective of her youngest child and only daughter and child still living with her and Arthur at The Burrow.
"Mum please understand, I love Harry and I want to live with him. Please..."
"Ginny, I know you love Harry, but I don't want you to rush into things. I let Ron go because he was older than you are now back then. Just giveit one more year, Ginny." Mrs Weasley begged her daughter to stay.
"NO!" Shouted Ginny, "I'm going. And i'm going now, today."
"You walk out that door dear. But if you do-"
A knock at the door made her stop mid-sentence.




I'll have to go now but i'll try put more on tonight. sorry :[
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PostPosted: July 11, 2008 4:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Who's at the door? O.o



It was good but I would definitely work on spacing. It helps if you type it on Word first then just copy and paste.
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PostPosted: July 12, 2008 4:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

come on...... continue
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PostPosted: July 14, 2008 7:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'd like to read more when you have the time to write it. Cool beginning to a good story.
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PostPosted: July 14, 2008 8:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

sounds promising Smile
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PostPosted: July 14, 2008 8:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm curious to read what happens next.... Smile
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PostPosted: July 16, 2008 12:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

ohh ohh! I wanna know whos at the door..cant wait. Very Happy
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PostPosted: July 16, 2008 1:23 am    Post subject: Re: Will you marry me? Reply with quote

[quote="KrazyMan"]You let Ron move away 2 years ago and he didn't have this problem..."

I let Ron go because he was older than you are now back then.

Isn't Ron only one year older than Ginny? That would mean that when he left he was actually one year younger than Ginny is now. Other than that, is sounds good so far
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