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KrazyMan


Joined: Jul 5, 2008
Location: Hogwarts School of Whichcraft and Wizardery.
Posts: 159
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Posted: July 11, 2008 3:54 pm Post subject: Will you marry me? |
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I haven't got much time now so this is just going to be a brief start to my fan-fic. I will update it.
This will also be in 2 parts.
It has been 5 years since the war at Hogwarts ended and He-who-must-not-be-name was killed. Harry Potter and Ginny Weasley have since become a couple and are soon to be celebrating their 4 year anniversary. Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger will son spend their 5 year anniversary.
PART ONE
"Mum, it's not as if I'm leaving for ever, I'm moving in with the love of my life. I'll visit you every day. You let Ron move away 2 years ago and he didn't have this problem..." Ginny's voice tailed off as her mother walked away from her. Molly Weasley was still so over-protective of her youngest child and only daughter and child still living with her and Arthur at The Burrow.
"Mum please understand, I love Harry and I want to live with him. Please..."
"Ginny, I know you love Harry, but I don't want you to rush into things. I let Ron go because he was older than you are now back then. Just giveit one more year, Ginny." Mrs Weasley begged her daughter to stay.
"NO!" Shouted Ginny, "I'm going. And i'm going now, today."
"You walk out that door dear. But if you do-"
A knock at the door made her stop mid-sentence.
I'll have to go now but i'll try put more on tonight. sorry :[ _________________
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OBatR


Joined: Jun 30, 2008
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Posted: July 11, 2008 4:02 pm Post subject: |
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Who's at the door? O.o
It was good but I would definitely work on spacing. It helps if you type it on Word first then just copy and paste. _________________ Chat!
It's like I knew you before we met... |
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Maniana


Joined: Jul 11, 2008
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Posted: July 12, 2008 4:57 am Post subject: |
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| come on...... continue |
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Jayfer


Joined: May 30, 2008
Location: Happy Christmas!
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Posted: July 14, 2008 7:45 am Post subject: |
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I'd like to read more when you have the time to write it. Cool beginning to a good story. _________________

If you miss Harry Potter, read "I Will" over in Flourish & Blotts. |
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pottergirl66


Joined: Mar 1, 2008
Location: Up your butt and around the corner
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Posted: July 14, 2008 8:21 am Post subject: |
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sounds promising  _________________ Sig by RJ (Evanesco)
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rose_16


Joined: Jul 13, 2008
Location: Potions Classroom
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Posted: July 14, 2008 8:30 am Post subject: |
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I'm curious to read what happens next....  |
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HPnDMFan


Joined: Jul 1, 2008
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Posted: July 16, 2008 12:07 am Post subject: |
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ohh ohh! I wanna know whos at the door..cant wait.  |
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Anyia


Joined: Jul 13, 2008
Location: My own little world
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Posted: July 16, 2008 1:23 am Post subject: Re: Will you marry me? |
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[quote="KrazyMan"]You let Ron move away 2 years ago and he didn't have this problem..."
I let Ron go because he was older than you are now back then.
Isn't Ron only one year older than Ginny? That would mean that when he left he was actually one year younger than Ginny is now. Other than that, is sounds good so far |
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