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Wandmaster14


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Posted: June 29, 2008 11:28 pm Post subject: The Supernatural Extermination Agency, by me. |
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Four hundred years ago in the year 1600 the first British charters of the East India Trading Company was signed by Queen Elizabeth, this was known as the golden age of Europe and truly it was but the British armada grew extremely powerful. The East India Company created a secret and private part of the Company, known as the Supernatural Extermination Agency
((I will write more in the morning, I have to go soon so i will stop here.)) _________________ So you see, every man has a price he will willingly accept even for that which he hopes never to sell--Lord Cutler Beckett
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XxJennxX


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Posted: June 30, 2008 4:25 am Post subject: |
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Sounds interesting. _________________
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Jayfer


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Posted: June 30, 2008 2:58 pm Post subject: |
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I'm interested, too. _________________

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pottergirl66


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Posted: June 30, 2008 3:00 pm Post subject: |
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good start! _________________ Sig by RJ (Evanesco)
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Jayfer


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Posted: July 2, 2008 7:41 am Post subject: |
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I love that time period - Elizabeth I. I can't wait to read more of your story!!! _________________

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Duelingwands

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Posted: July 2, 2008 12:12 pm Post subject: |
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It's quite interesting, though I recommend using spellcheck or having someone proofread it first to rid if of some spelling, grammer, and capitialization issues.
Overall, nice start! _________________ heh.
this is interesting. |
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FWFreedomfighter


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Posted: July 2, 2008 6:34 pm Post subject: |
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Looking forward to more. _________________ Wegle Wegle War Damn Eagle! Kick 'em in the butt Big Blue! |
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Wandmaster14


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Posted: July 5, 2008 10:38 pm Post subject: |
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The Supernatural Extermination agency wiped out nearly all of the magical people they enforced harsh and cruel rules. Lord Norton was appointed the head of the company, Norton was a cruel and ruthless man who cared nothing for others. Norton wreaked of power...
As the Company grew more powerful, Norton had great ambitions for the company and the British Empire... he was on the Search for they key to the heavens, which was also the key of Zeus, this key would give him the power to take over all gods and Zeus himself, which would make him capable of controlling the world both politically and naturally. But Norton failed, so everyone thought the company was defeated and Norton destroyed him and his ship sank to the crushing darkness...
Four hundred years later in the year 2008 there were rumors of a club called the East India Club, The club consisted of people who support the company and there powerful rule... _________________ So you see, every man has a price he will willingly accept even for that which he hopes never to sell--Lord Cutler Beckett |
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XxJennxX


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Posted: July 7, 2008 5:22 am Post subject: |
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That's really interesting so far.
Can't wait to read more. _________________
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FWFreedomfighter


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Posted: July 9, 2008 5:57 pm Post subject: |
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Look foreward to reading more. _________________ Wegle Wegle War Damn Eagle! Kick 'em in the butt Big Blue! |
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Jayfer


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Posted: July 10, 2008 8:35 am Post subject: |
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Looking forward to reading more.  _________________

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