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XxKelsixX
Joined: Jun 5, 2008
Location: Malfoy Manor
Posts: 289
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 Posted: June 5, 2008 1:36 am Post subject: My work on fanfiction.net |
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Here is a link to my work, check it out and let me know what you think!
Thanks!
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1573471/
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Riddle_Forsaken
Joined: Jun 12, 2008
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| Posted: June 24, 2008 12:39 am Post subject: Draco/Harry ff |
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Oooh!I really liked it.I have only read about 10 slash fics,and 9 out of ten of them were Draco/Harry and I only liked one(but now I like two  )I liked how you didn't just jump into it and built the story up with a plausible plot.
You did great in how to get Draco and Harry together.Harry saw malfoy with a curious gaze at first and with that thought-Wow, I never noticed how perfectly toned Malfoy is-turned into a subconiously lusty gaze for Draco.-And when Draco fessed up to Harry it turned into more than lust Harry saw a different side of Draco he liked and he could have more with him than just "you're hot let's snog!"Harry's tumoil/confusion was good too.
And on Draco's part when he opened up and explained what he really felt towards Harry just great.As I see it Draco someday saw something in Harry or what he did and held a tiny flame of secret admiration which grew over the school years into a wild fire of more than admiration and an array of diferent emotions but in that time he knew he wanted to be with Harry!
Great work.I really liked these parts when Draco said"What do you think Voldemort will think when he hears that a Malfoy is dating the famous Harry Potter?"
And Harry thought:‘Wow, wait until Hermione and Ron hear about this. Me!? I’m going out with Draco Malfoy'-that gave me the giddy giggles.I had never read/heard of them going out,only sitituations that end them up snogging or more...
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HPnDMFan
Joined: Jul 1, 2008
Posts: 40
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| Posted: July 4, 2008 1:22 am Post subject: |
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| Aww that was soo cute!! I love it, it was so sweet and it was my favorite pairings too! *adds to favorites* |
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