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I'm Sorry... [DH spoilers] short drabble, Snape-centric

 
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sagasimon
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PostPosted: February 10, 2008 10:32 am    Post subject: I'm Sorry... [DH spoilers] short drabble, Snape-centric Reply with quote
Title: I'm sorry...

Author: Mako-chan aka Sagasimon

Disclaimer: All characters belong to JK Rowling

Summary: DEATHLY HALLOWS SPOILER!!! You have been warned! Snape's thoughts before his death.

A/N: My first fic so be gentle... No beta-reading :/


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It is said that just before you die, all your past life rushes before your eyes.

But all I can see is the wrecked, wooden ceiling above my head.

I feel bitter.

It wasn't supposed to end like this. Not like this.

I guess that deep inside my heart I hoped to survive... to somehow take a part in the final battle... to clear my name... to get a chance of living my life the way I wanted to...

And yet here I lay, in a pool of my own blood, desperately squeezing my wound like it would change anything.

My vision blurring, slowing pulse thumping in my ears.

I failed at my mission... The mission I swore to myself I would complete...

...

I see green eyes... So familiar.

Lily?

No... it's not her

Harry... Lily's son.

I gather all my strenght that is left and relase my memories, urging the boy to take them.

Let him see... Let him see I am not the monster he assumes I am... I want him to know why... I want him to forgive me... I want anyone to forgive me.

My grip on the boy's robe is slacking.

I have no time left.

'Look ... at ... me ...' I barely whisper.

We lock our gazes for the split of second.

Those beautiful green eyes... I wish I could look at them for the whole eternity.

I'm sorry... Lily.

And then everything goes black...
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PostPosted: May 27, 2008 2:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
awww that's realy good. bu realy sad Sad that realy does sound like snapes thoughts
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PostPosted: May 28, 2008 9:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
ouww, you almost made me cry? Crying Is more coming? Snape`s after-life?
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PostPosted: May 28, 2008 3:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
It's beautiful. Extreamly well done! Please write more!
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PostPosted: May 28, 2008 8:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
aww that is REALY good! but sad Crying
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