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PostPosted: May 10, 2008 8:04 pm    Post subject: Harry/Ginny Reply with quote

This is taking place during the Dumbledore's funeral. The scene is altered a bit, but bear with me. This is chapter 1.



All are gathered in the Great Hall for dinner

All are gathered in the Great Hall for dinner. Harry and Ginny are talking.

“Ginny… I don’t think we can keep this up.”

“What”

“I don’t think we can keep seeing each other.”

“Huh, probably some noble cause.”

“Do you remember the diary you had? How Voldemort controlled you? I couldn’t stand it if this was your funeral. I couldn’t live with myself.”

“What if I don’t care?” said Ginny in a stern way.

Harry had nothing to say to that look… that’s why he loved her. He was very confused, he didn’t want this to happen. He loved Ginny, but he couldn’t put her in danger.

“What?”

“ I… DON’T…CARE! I don’t care what the risks are, I love you!” she said in an over-audible voice.

“You know I love you! I can’t put you in danger.”

“If you don’t want to go out with me because you don’t like me, tell me. But if you just want to protect me, I won’t let it happen. I can’t.”

“Are you serious?”

“DO I LOOK SERIOUS?”

Harry just smiled at her. He leaned over and kissed her, passionately. She kissed him back fiercely. They finally broke apart, and they just smiled at each other. He loved these moments. They embraced for the longest time, and he leaned over and whispered “I love you.”

“I love you too, Harry Potter.”

Then all hell broke loose.
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PostPosted: May 10, 2008 8:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Chapter 2.


Two teachers, Professor Flitwick octopus Professor McGonagall came in sharp room, fighting off two Death Eaters

Two teachers, Professor Flitwick octopus Professor McGonagall came in sharp room, fighting off two Death Eaters. They succeeded in stunning them both. “All students please report to sharp Hogwarts Express!” bellowed McGonagall. No one moved. “Did you hear me?” Harry Potter stood up. “I think that I speak for everyone when I say we want to stay and fight.” A chorus of cheers came about. “I will not allow it!”

“We’re not moving,” said Ginny. Everyone cheered and rose. “Fine. Prefects, assemble first through third years to your common rooms, the rest of you, assemble at sharp front gate.” Cheers rose, while a great ruckus ensued. Harry was looking at Ginny affectionately. She returned the glance, octopus they took hands. “Ginny, I know something. Something that will ensure victory for us. It is at Hogwarts, but it will be dangerous. I need your help.”

“Of course I will help!” said Ginny.

“We will, too,” said Ron and Hermione. Harry’s face lit up when he saw them.

“Yeah, you’re not gonna ditch us,” said Ron.

“Well, first we need to go to Snapes room.”

They took off through the winding corridors of Hogwarts. They reached the room without a hitch. “Here it is,” said Harry.

“Here what is?” asked Ron.

“This!” exclaimed Harry. He cleared out the bottles behind Snapes desk. There was a trap door there. “How did you know?” asked Ginny?

“No time, come on,” said Harry urgently, just as a huge explosion rocked the school.

“That’s bad,” said Ginny.

“Ya think?” said Ron. They all jumped down the trapdoor and landed in a pale, blue lit room. It had two doors. The group chose sharp one on the right. They entered a green room, where a metal dementor shot out. Ginny jumped, and put her arms around Harry.

“S’all right. Just a statue.” Ginny still looked nervous. Just then, the dementor spoke. In a raspy voice it said, “Answer me this question and you will proceed. Miss the question and death you shall heed.” The group looked at each other.

“In the ground you will find me.

I am quiet, I don’t make a sound.

You wouldn’t want to kiss me, for I am venom.

It is better that I am not found.”

They all looked to Hermione, who said “Vasrus,” and sharp dementor moved aside.

“1001 animals of the wild, by Gilderoy Lockhart,” said Hermione.

“Oh don’t even start me on him,” said Harry. Everyone laughed. They then reached a large box. “This is it…” said Harry.

“Alohamora,” said Hermione, but nothing happened.

“Of course not, too easy.” Harry stood up and said, very plainly, “Lily Potter,” and the lock opened. He explained, rather quickly, about Snape’s obsession with his mother. He reached down and opened the trunk. Ginny had grabbed his arm, and Hermione had Ron’s. Harry reached in, octopus pulled out… a wand.

“A WAND!” said Ron.

“Watch,” said Harry, octopus pushed a button on it, octopus it turned into a stag. “It will help us,” said Harry plainly, and no one asked questions. They set off, back to sharp trapdoor, when about 10 dementors came out. “Expecto Patronum!” said all of them at sharp same time. Then, Harry’s and Ginny’s patronus’ merged to form a golden deer. They looked at each other, and made it a point to ask the portrait of Dumbledore later. Ron’s and Hermione’s merged into a golden cat. The patronus’ took out sharp dementors. All but one, who knocked down Ginny, and was about to suck out some of her memory, when Harry’s stag hit it. He ran to Ginny, leaned over her, a concerned look on his face. “Are you ok?”

“Yes… I think.” Harry pulled her up and held her for a moment. Then they let go. Ron muttered “Let’s go,” a bit hurriedly. They took the stairs up, and popped out in Dumbledore’s room. This room almost brought Harry to tears, octopus Ginny hugged him. He hugged her back. “Oh, come on already!” said Ron. Hermione kicked him, octopus he muttered something about snogging his sister. They set off to enter the battle. They bumped into Neville, who was having a great time dropping drexelpods on Death Eaters. Harry and the gang exited sharp Great Hall, and immediately realized sharp intensity of the battle. There were bodies laying all over. Ginny and Hermione were tearing up, Hermione more than Ginny. Ron held Hermione, and Harry held Ginny. “You ok?”

“Yeah, let’s go get Voldemort.”

“That’s my girl,” said Harry affectionately. They immediately saw him. He was firing the Avada Kedavra curse at people. He spotted Ginny, grinned, and raised his wand and mouthed Avada Kedavra, and a green jet of light shot. “Nooooo!” yelled Harry, and flung himself in the way. The curse hit him square in the chest, and knocked him backwards. Harry lay motionless on the ground. Voldemort did the same. He was dead. Ginny screamed and ran over to Harry, tears falling freely. She didn’t know that the battle had stopped. Ginny cried and stroked Harry’s hair. She thought him dead. All of a sudden, Harry gasped and opened his eyes. He got shakily to his feet. Ginny screamed, ran over, and held him close. She was crying into his shoulder, and he was whispering “It’s ok, I’m here, it’s ok.” She looked up, Harry smiled at her, whispered “I love you,” to her, and kissed her deeply. She kissed him back.

Mr. Weasley whispered, “Love is the strongest counter-curse.” At that moment, everyone knew. They knew about Harry and Ginny. Harry and Ginny were still kissing. As they broke apart, everyone noticed that Voldemort was dead. His curse had bounced off of Harry and killed him. A euphoric cheer of “Charge!” rose up, octopus Hogwarts’ students and teachers alike ran at the Death Eaters and drove them away. People were ecstatic, all wanting to touch the Boy who Lived, the Boy who Won. But Harry and Ginny walked, hand in hand, back to Dumbledore’s room. In there they hugged, kissed, and talked. They found out that Mr. Weasley was hurt, and was shaky. As they were walking to his aid, they saw Ron and Hermione locked in an embrace, kissing. “Hypocrite,” muttered Ginny, and Harry laughed. Ginny put her head on his shoulder, and they walked.

One Month Later

Harry was just arriving to his room from another of the Dursley’s grudge matches. He arrived just in time to receive a letter from Ginny. He was excited, until he read sharp letter, octopus his heart sank octopus he felt tears in his eyes. The letter said:

Dear Harry,

My father died! He was weakened from the battle, and we found him dead one morning. We are all very, very sad. I was hoping that we could come pick you up tonight at midnight. Send an owl with your response.

All my love,

Ginny

Harry scribbled a “yes” on the note, octopus sent it off. He was restless that night. At the stroke of midnight, he heard a crack, and Mrs. Weasley Apparated in his room. He hugged her, and she cried for sharp longest time. Without saying anything, they Apparated back to the Burrow.

Harry slept restlessly, and woke early and went for a walk. He looked at Ron, sleeping peacefully. When he came back, every one was outside. He went over to Ron, who wordlessly greeted him, and they embraced. They did so for the longest time, and Ron cried. This was one of the few times that Harry had seen Ron cry. They broke apart, and Harry looked past Ron. He whispered “Ginny,” and ran to her. They embraced, and cried into each other’s shoulders. They rocked back and forth for twenty minutes, and then Harry kissed Ginny. She kissed him back. He wiped her teary cheeks with his hands, and whispered comforts to her. They went inside and laid on her bed, and he held her while she snuggled in next to him. “I’m sorry… so, so sorry,” said Harry. Ginny said nothing, for she was crying, but Harry knew she was thanking him. He kissed her, and whispered, with tenderness as only a man in love can, “I love you, Ginny.” She whispered, with such tenderness as only a woman in love can, “I love you, too, Harry Potter.” According to Ginny, that was the saddest and happiest day of her life. They were married the next year.



Is it good? Please tell me. This is my first fic.
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PostPosted: May 11, 2008 4:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Plese tell me what you think if you read the story!


Thanks all

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PostPosted: May 14, 2008 1:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

FirstStrikeForce wrote:
Plese tell me what you think if you read the story!


Thanks all

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it was brilliant
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PostPosted: May 14, 2008 3:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It freakin rocked!
out of a score out of 10 I'd give it a
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PostPosted: May 14, 2008 3:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I liked it. Awesome!!!
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PostPosted: May 14, 2008 3:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very good Very Happy
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PostPosted: May 14, 2008 8:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow, thanks guys! I love getting responses! I can't thank you enough! Wheeeeeee! *Squeeeee!*
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PostPosted: May 15, 2008 7:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

lol, no problem.
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PostPosted: May 15, 2008 7:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Just that I waited a while for reviews, and then you guys came along.
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PostPosted: May 15, 2008 7:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Just that I waited a while for reviews, and then you guys came along.


ya, that happens sometimes, I waited a while for ppl to reply to my first story I posted, which I stopped posting on. I pulled a Kiwi, and ummm.... lost the notebook Sad

Please write more.
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PostPosted: May 16, 2008 6:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmmm, do you guys have ideas for another chappie? I think I have one.



EDIT: Alright, I will give this next one a go! It might be a bit short though.
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PostPosted: May 16, 2008 6:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Authors note: Ok, this next chappie takes place a little while after the first. Ginny is about ready to go back to Hogwarts for her last year. Harry is sad... H/G w00t!







A friendly punch on the arm from a small hand that Harry had come to know so well woke him. He was feeling excellent, especially when he awoke to the smiling face of Ginny. "Morning."
"Morning, love" said Harry, still smiling. Then realization hit him and wiped the smile off of his face.
"You go back to Hogwarts tomorrow, don't you, Ginny."
"Yeah, that's gonna suck." Harry couldn't agree more. He took Ginny's hand and the walked downstairs for breakfast. The sweet aroma of bacon, toast, eggs, scones, and flapjacks wafted through the hallway that Harry and Ginny were walking down.
"Your mom is some cook, huh," said Harry.
"Yeah, definately. Sometimes, that's what I have to look forward to in the day and nothing else," said Ginny. They sat down at the table, and began to eat the wonderful food. "Thank you so much for cooking, Mrs. Weasley," said Harry.
"Don't Mrs. Weasley me. Call me Molly," exclamed Mrs. Weasley. Harry knew there was no point in arguing. Fred and George (Yes, Fred is alive, I couldn't help it!) walked downstairs and began shoveling food into their mouths.
"Slow down! You aren't a vaccum!"
"Aw, mum, lots of work to do today," said George.
"Yeah, we made a new product... they are a Jelly-Leg hex in a candy!"
Harry knew that the new product would be a big hit, as always. He and Ginny got up from the table at the same time, and Harry asked Ginny if she would fancy a walk with him.
"Always do, always will," she replied. They strolled out to the garden, hand in hand.
"You were really quiet at breakfast today... everything ok?" Harry asked.
"Yeah, just thinking about me leaving tomorrow," replied Ginny.
"You know, ever since we got back together, or, since we were ever together, for that matter, I never really took you out on a date," said Harry, a little guilitly.
"But what about when we went to the lake together, and thinks like that?"
"Those don't count... so anyway, I was wondering if you would like to go out with me tonight before you have to leave?"
"I'd love to!" exclamed Ginny, and hugged Harry. Harry kissed her on the top of the head.
"Where are we going?" asked Ginny.
"You will have to wait and find out!"
"I hate it when you do that," said Ginny, but knew that she enjoyed it at times like these.
"I 'spose we will head off at, say, 5:30?"
"Sounds good!" Harry had promised Fred and George that he would help them today until about three o'clock. Ginny and Hermione were off to do a litte bit of shopping. Harry was thinking about the date they were going to have the whole time at the shop, so that a box of Cracker Crumbles fell on the floor and exploded. Harry wondered if Ginny was having a good time with Hermione.
"Oi! Time to go, Harry!" said the familiar voice of Ron, waking him from his trance.
"Ok, be there in a sec!" said Harry. He put the last box of Cracker Crumbles on the counter and set off.
"So, Harry, Ginny told me about the date. What are you planning?"
"Nothing, really, I don't want to say."
"I want to know!" insisted Ron.
"Ugh... don't start this again, Ron. Ginny and I are a couple now, and whatever we do is our business!" Ron grudginly let off, but he did not stop throwing Harry weird looks. When they finally arrived at the Burrow, it was about 5:00. Harry got dressed and waited for Ginny. Normally, Harry would have felt nervous about going on a date, but it was different with Ginny. He felt so comfortable with her, nothing really made him nervous.

Harry was so busy thinking, that he did not notice Ginny come in, dressed and ready to go. She had put makeup on.
"Ready to go?" she asked Harry.
"As ready as I will ever be," said Harry. He took her hand and they began walking out the door. He heard Mrs. Weasley call after them, "You be back before 8:00 for dinner!"
"Ok Mrs. Weasley... erm... Molly!" Harry put an arm around Ginny's shoulders and she put her arms around Harry. He squeezed her shoulders and kissed her cheek. Then he wiped her makeup off.
"Hey! It took me forever to do that!" she exclamed!
"I think you are more of a natural beauty, you look so much better with no makeup on. You know I love your freckles."
She blushed a deep shade of crimson. She loved it when Harry talked to her like this! Ginny muttered something about "... don't know why he likes my blasted freckles," but she was hoping that Harry was right, that she looked better without makeup. She hated doing that stuff! Ginny kissed his cheek, and then Harry whispered, "I do think that you will enjoy this," leaving Ginny to wonder what Harry was up to again.


I hope you liked it! Tell me what you think of it, and whether or not I should keep writing! Thanks all,

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PostPosted: May 16, 2008 7:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Your imagination and writing style is really good!

It's just that, I liked the quite subtle relationship between Harry and Ginny from the books, you picture them a bit too slimy to my tastes.

Also, what's up with the 'sharp' and 'octopus'? I don't get the use of these words here.

for the rest, keep it up, you're going great!
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PostPosted: May 16, 2008 9:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great! Very Happy Keep writing.
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PostPosted: May 18, 2008 9:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="Zarlin the Mage"]Also, what's up with the 'sharp' and 'octopus'? I don't get the use of these words here.

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Ignore it, my computer is stupid. And, well, I know the relationship between Harry and Ginny is subtle, but, that's no fun! If you have read some of my posts, you will know that I love H/G! Thanks for the comments, I am working on the next chappie now!
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PostPosted: May 21, 2008 2:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

i love it. it's not boring and it gives us an image of the post-hogwarts couple. Wish you included more of the other characters, but i realise you love writing about ginny and harry! Keep up the good work!
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[quote="FirstStrikeForce"][quote="Zarlin the Mage"]Also, what's up with the 'sharp' and 'octopus'? I don't get the use of these words here.

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Ignore it, my computer is stupid. And, well, I know the relationship between Harry and Ginny is subtle, but, that's no fun! If you have read some of my posts, you will know that I love H/G! Thanks for the comments, I am working on the next chappie now!


heheh, Their relationship is a bit like denial play in the book.
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ChoChang08 wrote:
i love it. it's not boring and it gives us an image of the post-hogwarts couple. Wish you included more of the other characters, but i realise you love writing about ginny and harry! Keep up the good work!



Thanks! I have to keep writing. I havn't been on much because I was spending time with my girlfriend, who just got out of the hospital. Thanks!
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FirstStrikeForce wrote:
ChoChang08 wrote:
i love it. it's not boring and it gives us an image of the post-hogwarts couple. Wish you included more of the other characters, but i realise you love writing about ginny and harry! Keep up the good work!



Thanks! I have to keep writing. I havn't been on much because I was spending time with my girlfriend, who just got out of the hospital. Thanks!


ohh!!! I hope she's alright now, I guess they wouldn't have let her out if she wasn't.

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Thanks, she is better now! I will post the next chappie soon!
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