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Hocrux


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Posted: June 20, 2006 10:53 am Post subject: What do you think |
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A Friend Is...... .......
A friend is someone we lean on,
When we are feeling weak.
A friend is someone who help's us,
Find what it is we seek.
A friend is someone who looks out for you,
In all they say and do.
A friend is someone you don't have to tell,
For they already knew.
A friend is someone who would,
Go that extra mile.
A friend is someone who shows us,
A heart that does truly smile.
A friend is someone who'll stand by you,
And help you through your day.
A friend is someone who'll show you,
There is always a way.
A friend is someone who'll dry your tears,
When you feel you have to cry.
A friend is someone who'll pull you through,
When the tide feels ever so high.
A friend is someone who'll be there,
Until the very end.
A friend is someone who'll show us,
How that broken heart they'll mend.
A friend is someone who gives us,
Understanding, Joy and Grace.
A friend is someone who makes this world,
Truly a wonderful place.
Do you think this is cute or is it slightly disturbing ?
At this moment in time I think it a lot of tosh _________________ "WAR IS PEACE
FREEDOM IS SLAVERY
IGNORENCE IS STRENGHTH" - "1984" By George Orwell
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arya_bluedragon


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Posted: June 20, 2006 11:14 am Post subject: |
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I think it's very meaningful. It makes you think about your real friends and think about how much they actually mean to you. It's a very nice poem. _________________
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Lilly


Joined: May 21, 2006
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Posted: June 20, 2006 11:18 am Post subject: |
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Hmm...I don't know really....i guess I'll go with she said. But then again I don't think it is intirally true. You dont lean on your friends. _________________
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arya_bluedragon


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Posted: June 20, 2006 11:37 am Post subject: |
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I don't think it has to be entirely true. A poem just has to have either meaning, rhyming, etc. _________________
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Phoenix



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Posted: June 26, 2006 11:39 am Post subject: |
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I think its a nice poem However, everyone has thier own defintion for a friend _________________
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milkdud

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Posted: August 4, 2006 9:30 pm Post subject: |
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That's nice. I think the poem makes us think of what an ideal bestest and greatest friend.
Did you make that? |
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Shinar


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Posted: August 7, 2006 7:57 pm Post subject: |
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The poetry here is a work of art, the words are expressive...but I'm just sorry to say, friends like that are only in the movies...
Sure, friends can say "Cmon, chin up" but what they have on the face on their heart is a scrunched up messy looking bundle of the words " ick" and "ew"
Sure, friends can pick you up when you fall, but one day they'll say "Oh, I had something else to do, I'm sorry that I wasn't there"
But, everyone has their opinion...
Otherwise, I love your poem....!!!  _________________ I am something you can show, but something you can't see... |
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bdbucky


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Posted: December 28, 2006 3:13 pm Post subject: |
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heh, shoot, that is deep. I like it a lot _________________
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Tessa


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Posted: January 3, 2007 3:56 pm Post subject: |
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Horcrux, are you a he or a she?
Anyway, I agree with it. _________________ Nederlands!! |
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Phoenix



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Posted: January 3, 2007 7:55 pm Post subject: |
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Hocrux is a she _________________
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