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Posts: 3529 · Posted: February 17, 2008 3:42 pm Post subject: Ginny and Draco...one shot..

okay this story is about Ginny and draco...im only gonna post a little bit of it. i don't like it much. i feel like i rushed them but it is a one shot. so ya...please comment!

here it goes:

The room was quiet, the fire was starting to dim. The room was almost empty. Only a girl remained curled up in a big chair, staring into the fire. Only a little bit of night showed into the gryffindor common room. The moon was rising. Dawn was approaching. Ginny weasley was still up. she couldn't get to sleep. she had tons of homework and she just couldn't get through any of it. She stayed up trying to study and mesmorize everything. But she just couldn't. Her mind keep wandering. so she packed all her things away at a quarter to four. Wait for morning. She tried to shut her eyes but sleep wouldn't come to her.. She stayed up for hours. Just sitting there. The sun shone through the windows, morning was here. She still knew it was quite early, but she never seen the castle at dawn. Maybe if she walked around a bit, get some fresh air, she could focus. So she grabbed her bag and headed out of the portrait hole.

She was walking down a corridor when she heard footsteps. She didn't know if she was allowed out or not this early. she quickly hid behind a nearby statue. She peered around to see who it was. Tall and thin, with sleek blonde hair and Slytherin robes.
"draco," she whispered, "he's up to no good if he's out this early."

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okay its not much now...juss comment if you like it or hate it...and i will post more.

.:.Lovely.:.
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"You know, Jacob,
if it weren’t for the fact that we’re natural enemies
and that you’re also trying to steal
away the reason for my existence,
I might actually like you."
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I like it, it's pretty good! But, thats just my opinion Razz

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Posts: 750 · Posted: February 17, 2008 10:23 pm Post subject:

its good, post more
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Posts: 13085 · Posted: February 18, 2008 10:17 pm Post subject:

ya i like it...it is good Wink

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Posts: 3529 · Posted: February 18, 2008 10:21 pm Post subject:

well i have all of it done...im juss gonna wait a little to what other people say...but thankz everyone!
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"You know, Jacob,
if it weren’t for the fact that we’re natural enemies
and that you’re also trying to steal
away the reason for my existence,
I might actually like you."
Edward Cullen, Eclipse

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Its good!!!!! Post the rest!!!!!!!!!!!
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Good...Post more and it'll be better.
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Excellent Work. Wonderful! Very Happy

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post more it's awsome
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can u post it already please
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[b][u]CAN YOU PLEASE POST!!
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Likey.
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So are you ever going to post again
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I like it, please post the rest.
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Posts: 3529 · Posted: June 10, 2008 5:18 pm Post subject:

wow...i guees people like it. i didn't think no one owuld so i didn't post it. but i will tonight...i just gotta find my papers!!!
sorry about that.
<3LOVELY
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"You know, Jacob,
if it weren’t for the fact that we’re natural enemies
and that you’re also trying to steal
away the reason for my existence,
I might actually like you."
Edward Cullen, Eclipse

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It's a great start and I'm looking forward to reading more.
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Posts: 10856 · Posted: June 11, 2008 10:46 am Post subject:

That's really good, you should post more =)
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Posts: 3529 · Posted: June 11, 2008 6:03 pm Post subject:

Well iam truly amazed by how many people want to hear the rest...so here it is:

As Draco kept walking, ginny followed, closely behind. Taking a moment to stop here and there. She was determined to see what he was up to. She soon followed him all the way out on the grounds. Ginny had to wait. He would see her if she kept following him. She watched him carefully. The sun was now fully visable, must have been at least six in the morning. In an hour or so people would be getting up. Ginny watched draco go down by the lake and sit under a tree, barely visable. She wanted to get closer. she slowly crept all the way down to a tree that was near draco. she could hear him throwing rocks into the lake. She tried to listen to what he was saying. so she crept a little closer and sat on the other side of the tree, trying very hard not to make a sound.
"No one understand. Ican't do this no more. everyone expects me to be just like them. I'm not my father! I'm nothing like him! and i never will be!"
ginny sat still, she could her rocks hitting the lake surface. her mind was racing. What was he talking about? she sat there thinking, was it true? is there something more tot his boy? but he started to speak again, ginny listened closely;
"I need someone. Someone who will see the real me. I can't stand being around all those slytherins anymore. They all expect me to be something im not. They're all nuts! and especially that pansy! She acts like im her king or something. I can't stand that. i want love, not devotion. i want the real thing! But everyone here thinks im this little conceited ass hole. no one will even try to look past that. and i don't deserve it any way. the way i act. i played that part for years now. i just didn't know how to stop. what am i to do? No one will understand."
Ginny sat there, stunned. Draco Malfoy just poured out his soul, Ginny didn't know what to do. Should she run to the castle and keep it a secret, admiring him from a distance? Should she wait for more? Ginny wanted to hold him close. Be gentle to him and tell him she accepts him...Loves him. But then ginny stopped what was she saying? this was draco. Draco! the boy who has sneered about her family all these years. Yes she thought he was rather handsome. she promised to never talk to him, get involved with someone like that. Was he that really stuck up guy? or this new boy she found. who pours his heart out at dawn? Ginny moved her leg, which was a bad move because just then a twig broke. It made a snap. Should she run? Did he hear her?
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well thats the next part. enjoy.
please comment. and tell me how im doing. remember this is my first fan fic. please be honest. good or bad i want to know!
thanks
Lovely
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"You know, Jacob,
if it weren’t for the fact that we’re natural enemies
and that you’re also trying to steal
away the reason for my existence,
I might actually like you."
Edward Cullen, Eclipse

Posts: 5013 · Posted: June 11, 2008 6:15 pm Post subject:

Awesome!

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it's great!
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Thats was very good! Well done Smile

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Hmmm Ginny and Draco. I never would have thought that would happen, but I like how she gets to see a side of him that he never showed in the HP series. I can see how she'd be drawn to him after she heard his "true" feelings. Harry won't like this......he'll be Shocked

I'm looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work. You may want to proofread your writing, there were a couple of typos, but other than that, the story is developing excellently.
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Posts: 3529 · Posted: June 12, 2008 10:17 am Post subject:

thanks jayfer! see i really want feedback like that. it gives me confidence! lol thanks tho! and i will keep up the good work! lol
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"You know, Jacob,
if it weren’t for the fact that we’re natural enemies
and that you’re also trying to steal
away the reason for my existence,
I might actually like you."
Edward Cullen, Eclipse

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Awsome!!! Can you post more??????????
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