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HARRY'S FUTURE DESTINY - CHAPTER 1

 
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Auror Ferula
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PostPosted: August 3, 2007 3:04 pm    Post subject: HARRY'S FUTURE DESTINY - CHAPTER 1 Reply with quote

Harry was laying peacefully on his bed when Ginny screamed and heard a voice CRUCIO! Where is Harry Potter, tell me, tell me!!!! Ginny said, "I don't know!" CRUCIO!!!!!!!!!! TELL ME WHERE HE IS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Harry came down the stairs and aimed his wand firmly at the Death Eater, Macnair. Harry said, Well, hello, Macnair, do you really want to kill me? Or destroy my wife? Well, thats too bad Harry taunted. You can't kill my wife neither me! Oh, is that so, Potter? Yes, that is so! Ok, Crucio! It missed Harry by a few feet. I am the headmaster, Macnair. I am the headmaster!!!!!! Yeah and so? Harry's anger broke, he couldn't bear it anymore. Avada Kedavra! shouted Harry! Macnair thought is was another spell so he flicked his wand, it didn't work the Avada Kedavra went right through the flicking and through his wand and hit him... in the middle of his chest. Macnair let out a scream and then went flying throught the air and landed on the ground. Ginny had bruises on her everywhere. Harry immediately went into the hospital room in their house while carrying Ginny. He laid Ginny on one of te beds and put Essence of Dittany on her. It healed in a second. She woke up and said, Harry, you just saved my life. And then kissed Harry fully. Harry did the same to her. You're so brave and courageous, Ginny, said Harry. Just like a true Gryffindor. And then Harry went to make breakfast for both of themselves. During some periods they kissed each other during breakfast. After breakfast they took small 1-year old Albus Potter and 3-year old James Potter. And went to take a shortcut to the Burrow. As they reached the Burrow a cold chill swept over them. Dementors, thought Harry. Ginny said, Oh no, Harry, there are dementors! Just what I thought Harry said back. EXPECTO PATRONUM!!!! A stag and a horse came rushing out of their wands. And then they went away. Harry went right past the new flying car the Weasley' family had and then headed straight for the door. As they were getting closer to the door, they heard the bush move, they raised their wands and shouted, "Impedimenta!" The victim went flying and they saw that it was Neville and Luna. Sorry Neville, sorry Luna, said Harry and Ginny blushing. It's ok Neville and Luna said back. So what are you guys doing here, Neville and Luna? We're trying to enter the Burrow and some Death Eaters were chasing us. Harry looked around, there was nobody around here... and then so they entered the Burrow it was very bright. The Weasley' family were sitting around a thing that seemed to be a TV. The Weasleys' just stared at the TV. And so Harry, Ginny, Neville, and Luna went to sit on one of the sofas. They watched the TV like thingymajigy. It had a bigger screen and had something like a keyboard. Harry carried 3-year old James and Ginny carried 1-year old Albus. Finally, Ron, and Hermione turned around and saw Harry and Ginny. How are you doing Ron and Hermione asked Neville, Luna with Newt in their hands, Harry, and Ginny. And then the whole Weasley' family looked at them and nodded tell them that they should watch it too. (CONTINUED ON CHAPTER 2)
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PostPosted: August 3, 2007 10:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like it, but it was sort of hard to read with it bunched up like that. Other than that keep going it seems great!
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PostPosted: August 4, 2007 11:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

thanks, I just keep forgetting to make paragraphs.
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PostPosted: August 4, 2007 4:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

CHAPTER 2

They sat on the sofa to watch the thing. Harry was whispering to Ginny, "Blimey, Ginny, what the heck is that thing?" Ginny replied, "It's a Torty." Harry said, "A torty, what the heck is a torty?" Ginny anwsered, "A torty is a kind of television thing that Dad made for us in Christmas. It shows all kinds of intresting news." Harry said, "Oh." And so they kept on watching. Since they had arrived at the Burrow at Morning, they left at the Afternoon. So they went home safely. But when they arrived home, they found the whole home ruined by very, very Dark Magic. So all they could do was hope for this and shout, "Reparo Retuy!" And it worked, so Harry and Ginny could live ther again.
Three days later, Harry said, "Ginny, I'm going to take a walk, you stay here and guard James and Albus." So Harry went out the door locked it, and then went on his walk. Harry was thinking about something in his mind so he didn't really care what he was doing. Suddenly the bushes shook as though someone were shaking hands in there. Harry immediately got his wand out of his pocket, just then out of the bush came a voice, "Put your wands down, or meet death!" Harry wanted to protect himself so he sent a very advanced jinx at the Death Eater, who fell sideways and fell out of the bushes. "Oh, so it's you Rookwood? You're not dead? Well, I thought Percy killed you, suprising, eh?" said Harry. Ginny heard it and made protections around the house got James and Albus and ran toward Harry. Harry said, "You ok, Ginny?" Ginny replied, "I'm fine, I j-just wanted to s-see if you w-were in t-trouble." "Oh, I'm fine, Ginny, don't worry." said Harry. Ginny said, "Let's walk together if one dies the other one takes over." "No!" shouted Harry. We can't do it together, if we do do it together, then we still have to be safe and not die!" yelled Harry.
After that dangerous walk, Harry and Ginny went home talking about what they should do to James and Albus and 1-year old Lily when they were in Hogwarts. James was already 11-years old and Albus was 9-years old and Lily was 7-years old. Lily finally asked on a Sunday, "Daddy, where is James going?" Harry said, "To the Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry." Lily cried. She wanted to go to Hogwarts too. Finally Harry led James, Albus, and Lily when Lily was 11 let them all go to Hogwarts. So then they went to King Cross train station and were kissing their children and said to James, "James, I want you to take very good care of Lily, and Albus, understand?" James replied, "Understand." And then so they talked to Lily and Albus and then they went on the train and parents were giving last-minute reminders. The train gathered speed and then was gone.
On the train James, Albus, and Lily met Scorpius. James stood out in front and then said, "Why, it's a Malfoy!" Scorpius shouted, "Expellarmus!" But James blocked it and Scorpius's wand went flying out of his grip. James laughed heartily. And so Scorpius got angry and went back to his compartment. Before he reached the compartment door though, James sent a Jelly-Legs jinx that made Scorpius's legs turn extremely wobbly as some people helped him into his compartment.
They had arrived at Hogwarts. Hagrid shouted, "First years over here!" Lily walked over to Hagrid as Albus and James just got into the boats and rode away. And then after them, Lily came. James and Albus smiled as Lily walked into the Great Hall. "I will sort you into your houses now" said Mcgonagall. Potter, Lily? Lily walked up to the Sorting Hat. The Sorting Hat shouted, "HUFFLEPUFF!" Lily walked over to the Hufflepuff table and then sat down. A guy called Michael Zhao on the Hufflepuff table caught sight of her, and as soon as she saw him, they both fell in love as if Cupid shot a arrow into boh of them.
(Continued on Chapter 3...)
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PostPosted: August 4, 2007 5:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

"On the train James, Albus, and Lily met Scorpius. James stood out in front and then said, "Why, it's a Malfoy!" Scorpius shouted, "Expellarmus!" But James blocked it and Scorpius's wand went flying out of his grip. James laughed heartily. And so Scorpius got angry and went back to his compartment. Before he reached the compartment door though, James sent a Jelly-Legs jinx that made Scorpius's legs turn extremely wobbly as some people helped him into his compartment."


That part of the story sort of sounds like the train scene on my fanfic with a twist.
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PostPosted: August 4, 2007 7:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

CHAPTER 3

As Michael stared at Lily, McGonagall said, "Now let the feast begin!" Lily ran next to Michael to sit near him. And then they started eating. Lily said, "Are your parents muggles or wizards?" Michael said sadly, "Muggles." Lily said, "Oh, mine are wizards." They started eating again. A Slytherin was pointing his wand at them and shouting, "Expelliarmus!" Jets of red lights were flying everywhere as Daisy Patil was bouncing of the walls.
After the Great Feast, Lily and Michael held hands to the Hufflepuff Common Room. It was night so Michael and Lily were supposed to sleep. But all the other students went to sleep but they just lit their wands and said, "Lumos!" They starting speaking again. "So what are you planning to learn this summer? I can protect you! I'm a 6th year!" Lily stammered, "P-protect me?" Michael replied, "Yes." Lily agreed, but then thought, "But James is already protecting me..." And so she just slept on a sofa too.
When they woke up it was 4:32 a.m. So they crept out of the Hufflepuff Common Room out onto the deserted Hogwarts Grounds. On the Grounds, she and Michael saw 4th year Scorpius. Michael recognized Scorpius immediately and pointed his wand at him. Scorpius did the same thing. They both shouted, "Sectumsempra!" Their wands connected. Michael won. Scorpius hit a stone and fell very unconcious. They went to Hagrid's Hut and said, "Here we are." Hagrid was still sleeping on a magically conjured bed.

(CONT. ON CHAPTER 4...)
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PostPosted: August 4, 2007 7:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OH REALLY, I didn't read yours!
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PostPosted: August 4, 2007 7:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I see, I'm sorry for wrongly acuseing you. Although you don't need to take it out on me in your fan-fic.
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PostPosted: August 4, 2007 9:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

oh, it's ok
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PostPosted: August 5, 2007 11:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

CHAPTER 4

Hagrid was sleeping as you know, and Michael and Lily accidentally tripped on the floor. Hagrid immediately woke up and said, "Who's there?" Lily stammered, "I-it's us, Hagrid." Hagrid sat up and said, "Oh, it's you guys. What do you want?" Michael said, "Nothing, just wandering around the--" His voice was interrupted by Fudge's voice, "I'll go meet Hagrid, Albus." They heard Fudge and Dumbledore's footsteps. "Quick, go out the other door!", said Hagrid. So Lily and Michael went out the other door.
Fudge and Dumbledore came in, but Fudge's actions weren't normal. It was because he wasn't Fudge, he was actually Bellatrix Lestrange.
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PostPosted: August 6, 2007 9:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Awesome!
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PostPosted: August 27, 2007 4:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Chapter 5

Michael and Lily were out in Hagrid's front garden when a zap of green light shot out of Fudge's wand and it missed Lily and hit a pumpkin. Hagrid looked at Fudge and shot a Stunning Spell which bombed a kettle of tea he had made last night. Fudge looked mischevious and sent another Killing Curse at Hagrid but it missed and broke a chunk off his little hut. Michael yelled, "Expelliarmus!" It flew toward Fudge and hit his hat which exploded and flew off Fudge's head. Fudge said loudly, "What was that? Bombarda!" The back door of the hut exploded and splintered wood flew everywhere. Hagrid bellowed, "How dare you, Fudge! [/i]Avada Kedavra!" A jet of green light roared out of Hagrid's pink umbrella but missed and hit a tree that got pulled from it roots and nearly landed on his hut. Fudge laughed cheerfully meanwhile (Aberforth) Dumbledore was fighting Death Eaters too in Hagrid's front garden. Fudge ran toward the pumpkin where Michael and Lily were hiding behind. When Fudge got there Lily shouted, "Wingardium Leviosa!" While Michael pointed his wand at Fudge and shouted, "Levicorpus!" Fudge was levitated and upside down. "Let me down!" bellowed Fudge as his Polyjuice Potion wore off and became Bellatrix Lestrange was upside down there. Michael and Lily laughed. "So, we knew you weren't dead!" yelled Michael angrily. Bellatrix sneered and yelled, "Avada Kedavra!" It missed Michael as Michael roared, [i]"Stupefy!"
(CONTINUED ON CHAPTER 6....)
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PostPosted: August 31, 2007 4:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

After Michael and Lily had escaped Bellatrix


"Where did the two people go?" sneered Draco. "I thought you said that you were going to bring them back!" Bellatrix said, "Sorry, my Lord, they were to strong." But then Malfoy roared with outrage, "YOU LITTLE SERVANT, YOU ARE SO WEAK!" Bellatrix shuddered as a jet of green light hit her from Malfoy's wand. She screamed and she landed on the other part of the room, dead. Malfoy said, "I must go find them myself!" He swished his cloak and appeared in Hagrid's front garden. Hagrid sent a Killing Curse at Malfoy as soon as he appeared. Malfoy laughed and ducked as he sent the Killing Curse back at Hagrid, Hagrid roared with outrage and slashed Macnair unconscious.

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Lily and Michael were still laughing about how they had escaped Belaltrix. Malfoy found them and screamed, "
[i]Avada Kedavra!
" Michael yelled, "Protego!"[/i]
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PostPosted: August 31, 2007 11:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i like it!
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