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sempra


Joined: Aug 25, 2007
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Posted: August 25, 2007 8:23 pm Post subject: Harry after DH - So alone (worth reading) |
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Yes, he had defeated Voldemort, and his soul was free, no more torture. But Harry had never felt so lonely. He was now 18, living on his own in Sirius's former house, Grimmauld Place.
Sirius.
He had lost so many, Sirius was just another. James, Lily, Cedric, Sirius, Dumbledore, Lupin, and sometmies he was feeling sorry for Snape.
But he had expected this, his life would never be free and full of fun. Oh no, his life was no slice of tasty peach.
Ginny was back at Hogwarts, Hermione and Ron were visiting Hermione's parents place. He would soon start Auror training, which was one positive. The biggest positive he arguably ever had now; was the fact that his scar
never pricked, getting Voldemort out of way meant starting to live a free life.
Harry now had a new obsession, one that possibly took up all his time. He still didn't feel secure, and to help his Auror training, Harry started borrowing the books Hermione took out of Dumbledore's office some time ago. Secrets of the Dark Ars, Curses You Shouldn't Know and his least favourite but more interesting, Horcrux hunting. At least these books kept him interested, he learned millions of new spells, such as Fiendfyre, which he had the unfortunate memory of having to escape once. Had it not been for Dumbledore in his Hogwart's 5th year, Voldemort might of triggered another memory of Fiendfyre. Harry would never dare to try any of these
spells, but just in case he was back..
Don't think about that, he shouted without speaking, in his head.
As Harry entered the kitchen in Sirius's former house, he saw Kreacher.
"Kreacher!" Harry shouted, while trying to keep his voice pleasant.
"Kreacher is happy to see half blood master".
"Can you make me something to eat please, Kreacher? I'm starving."
"Of course, Kreacher lives to please master."
Harry saw something that made him almost fall over his chair. The Daily Prophet were a lot more fair to Harry these days, true. But this storyline he would have to investigate himself, finally these curses would be useful. He needed to stop more people from getting harmed, he didn't want more work, in fact he hadn't used his wand in almost a month.
DO YOU WANT MORE, PEOPLE? (My first time, by the way) _________________
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xxbloodythoughts


Joined: Jun 28, 2007
Location: Detroit, Mich
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Posted: August 25, 2007 10:16 pm Post subject: |
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alexp128


Joined: Aug 22, 2007
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Posted: August 25, 2007 10:26 pm Post subject: |
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pretty interesting but a lil short
more! lol _________________
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sempra


Joined: Aug 25, 2007
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Posted: August 26, 2007 4:13 am Post subject: |
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Okay, I'll write some more. _________________
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Duelingwands

Joined: Jul 27, 2007
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Posted: August 26, 2007 8:26 am Post subject: |
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I love it! I think the storyline is very interesting, as not many fanfics cover this specific period of time. _________________ heh.
this is interesting. |
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sempra


Joined: Aug 25, 2007
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Posted: August 26, 2007 9:28 am Post subject: |
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Cheers, it's comments like that, that make me want to write more. I'll have to think up a smart idea though.. _________________
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jreyes130


Joined: Feb 12, 2008
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Posted: March 5, 2008 6:36 pm Post subject: |
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its good wright more now _________________
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pottergirl66


Joined: Mar 1, 2008
Location: Up your butt and around the corner
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Posted: March 16, 2008 2:04 pm Post subject: |
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tottaly awsome one thing right longer chapters!!!! _________________ Sig by RJ (Evanesco)
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Lynners


Joined: Mar 15, 2008
Location: Canada
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Posted: March 17, 2008 2:24 pm Post subject: |
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good work i really enjoyed reading through that write more  _________________ Snape: Do you remember me telling you that we are practising nonverbal spells, Potter?
Harry: Yes
Snape: Yes, SIR.
Harry: There's no need to call me "Sir", Professor. |
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ray_30579


Joined: Feb 1, 2008
Location: Somewhere in South-America
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Posted: March 17, 2008 4:46 pm Post subject: |
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too short, not bad. I think you could deliver something awesome.
you can do it! you can do it all night long!  |
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Gred_and_Forge


Joined: Mar 19, 2007
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Posted: March 17, 2008 4:49 pm Post subject: |
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its good!
i really like it...more please!  _________________
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pottergirl66


Joined: Mar 1, 2008
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Posted: March 18, 2008 5:16 pm Post subject: |
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when are you going to write more??? I'm board out of my mind I need something good to read _________________ Sig by RJ (Evanesco)
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weasley_king

Joined: Mar 19, 2008
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Posted: March 19, 2008 6:44 pm Post subject: |
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| hope i write more soon |
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pottergirl66


Joined: Mar 1, 2008
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Posted: March 20, 2008 6:05 pm Post subject: |
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PLEASE wrie more!!! _________________ Sig by RJ (Evanesco)
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FWFreedomfighter


Joined: Dec 23, 2007
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Posted: March 23, 2008 4:33 pm Post subject: |
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it's good! short so far, but good all the same. _________________ Wegle Wegle War Damn Eagle! Kick 'em in the butt Big Blue! |
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Benz_Luna_Fan89


Joined: Mar 24, 2008
Location: Ktown aka Knoxville
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Posted: March 25, 2008 12:05 am Post subject: |
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I like keep going at it, its gonna be good to hear more! _________________
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Length: 12.5 inches
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nefertiri


Joined: Nov 14, 2007
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Posted: March 25, 2008 11:09 am Post subject: |
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good _________________
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Takhan


Joined: Mar 31, 2008
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Posted: March 31, 2008 7:17 am Post subject: |
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Good!  _________________ Light shall fall.....Shadow shall rise...
EMBRACE YOUR DESTINY! |
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Dirty_Blood_Princess


Joined: Jun 9, 2007
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Posted: March 31, 2008 9:07 pm Post subject: |
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devote your life to it... haha
i really liked it.
write more.
and make it longer.  _________________
Ron (L) Hermy 4ever
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