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ohhhh I wanna know what the decision is!!!
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GinnyX
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NO!!!!
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GinnyX
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| Posted: August 23, 2007 6:37 am Post subject: |
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no... 
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well wat happens next???
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| Posted: August 23, 2007 2:14 pm Post subject: |
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great job, im scared for poor severus but of course he gets to stay at hogwarts or he wouldn't be using magic as an adult, unless u change the story that drasticl 
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your cruel 
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Wacky Macky
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no, i'm awesome, or you wouldn't be reading my fanfic.
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hahaha...cruel is more of the word i was thinking to
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Severus sat in the courtroom, playing with his hands nervously.
How long does it take... He thought to himself, the five minutes that had passed had seemed like an eternity. He sighed, looking around the abandoned room... it seemed a lot bigger when he was the only one in it.
The Minister and council walked back to their seats and sat down... Severus straightened himself immediately. The Minister looked troubled, but how bad could the punishment be, after all, it wasn't that much of an offense...
"Mr. Snape, we have decided an adequate punishment for the crime committed." The Minister paused to look down at some notes he had obviously made during the meeting, and turned back up to Severus. "The council and I conclude that you shall be held in the Ministry prison for exactly 6 months. You will still have class, will be allowed visitors on the weekends, and you will have the most pristine living conditions possible... but you must stay in your cell at all times, even for meals. Is this understood?" Severus' eyes widened.
"P-Prison?" He stuttered, his throat suddenly extremely dry.
"Yes... prison. Very high-security prison, for 6 months... but it will be nothing like Azkaban would be, we would never send a young boy there. Are you in understanding of your consequences, Severus?" Severus nodded in response, taking a deep breath in an attempt to clear his head.
It didn't work.
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Prison! Ahhh! Poor Severus. Very nicely done though. 
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Awww. Poor severus.
It would be a nice twist if James was his cellmate 
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PRISON!!! on his very first offense??? i am goin down to the ministry to protest against this... this is an outrage!!! they gonna keep him in a cell for 6 months??? no wonder he looks so pale now as presnt day snape... this is really disgusting... 
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that's why it sys in the first post that it could get a little irrational to fit the story. 
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| LunaRocksTheRadishes wrote: |
| that's why it sys in the first post that it could get a little irrational to fit the story. |
oh no u got it wrong... m not commenting on ur story writing... i love it u already kno tht... m jus getting into the reading kno wat i mean??? this is how i react even wen i read rowling... m jus putting dwn watever m thinking while i read... besides i feel like m watching the story happen like 'truman show'...
thts why m goin out to protest against the ministry.. if my problem was ur story writing i'd b protesting outside ur house
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Wacky Macky
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| bitterhope wrote: |
| LunaRocksTheRadishes wrote: |
| that's why it sys in the first post that it could get a little irrational to fit the story. |
oh no u got it wrong... m not commenting on ur story writing... i love it u already kno tht... m jus getting into the reading kno wat i mean??? this is how i react even wen i read rowling... m jus putting dwn watever m thinking while i read... besides i feel like m watching the story happen like 'truman show'...
thts why m goin out to protest against the ministry.. if my problem was ur story writing i'd b protesting outside ur house |
hah. okay... i'm in the process of writing the next chapter right now, it should be fairly long too.
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hi, I'm just picking up here, and I intend to become an avid fan of this fanfic cause omg it's awesome!!
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When are you going to make your next entry?
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Well you didn't lol. Great story so far.
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6 months!!!! Poor Sevvy!
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