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mzradcliffe14
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PostPosted: August 22, 2007 2:50 pm    Post subject: a harry/hermione fanfic Reply with quote

(((note: im a huge r/hr shipper but this is just something i wanted to try. this is also my first fanfic. leave any suggestions on the forum i really welcome them. dont be too harsh tho... lol))

Hermione could feel Ron’s breath on her neck, he had fallen asleep on her again. Grinning, Hermione slowly nudged him off and went to her kitchen. It had been two weeks since the war at Hogwarts, and before Hermione was to return her parent’s memories, she decided to invite Ron, Harry, and Ginny over to her home where none of them had ever been. Yawning, Hermione opened her fridge and took out pancake mix. Ever since being in various forests collecting edible food, Hermione had grown accustomed to making food for everyone. Hermione heard a shuffle, a yawn, and footsteps approaching the kitchen. It was Harry.

“Hey Harry,” said Hermione cheerfully, while taking out a pan and butter.
“Mornin’,” yawned Harry.
Hermione busied herself by turning on the oven and starting to make the pancakes.
“You know Hermione… it’d be easier to use magic,” said Harry.
“Harry! You know perfectly well according to Ga-,” started Hermione.
“Yeah, yeah, yeah I know you can’t transfigure food but you can lift the pans and stuff by wand…”
“I don’t mind, it’s nice not having to use magic for every little thing.”
Harry grinned. “You mean like Ron?”
“Yes precisely! He apparates just to get from one inch to another!” exclaimed Hermione.
“Right… but you faaaancy him,” said Harry with a little kid voice.
“Oh honestly Harry,” blushed Hermione, throwing a kitchen rag at him.
Harry ducked just in time, then he looked up at Hermione. “Do you love him?”
Harry expected another dish rag to be thrown at him, instead Hermione sat in front of him while the pan sizzled. She looked into Harry’s eyes. “I’ve liked him for a while now. You probably knew all along. I love him most definitely as a brother but as a boyfriend… well for now I’m just happy we’re together. How about you and Ginny?”
Harry grinned. “We’re great. She’s a feisty one…”
“Feistier than Ronald?” giggled Hermione.
Soon Harry and Hermione were doubled over laughing, imagining Ron as a feisty person.
“What’s all this noise?” yawned Ron, shuffling into the room. Ginny was next to Ron, staring at Harry and Hermione.
“Nothing,” said Harry. He threw the dish rag Hermione had thrown at him back at her. Ginny’s eyes narrowed and she went and sat on Harry’s lap.
“Blimey, I could’ve sworn I heard my name,” shrugged Ron.
“You must’ve been dreaming,” said Hermione while she winked at Harry.
Ron shrugged and went to hug Hermione. Harry looked away. Even though it was just a hug it felt like something intimate that he shouldn’t be looking at. The moment he turned away, Ginny grabbed his hands and told him to come with her. Harry glanced at Ron, who had his face inches away from Hermione’s and nodded. He followed Ginny into Hermione’s guest room, where she was staying.
“Look… Harry… I love you. I know this may sound stupid but I need to know you only like Hermione as a friend,” said Ginny as soon as she closed the door.
“What?? Ginny I don’t love Hermione in that way. I like you!” exclaimed Harry.
“Good,” said Ginny. She sat on the bed in the room and motioned for Harry to sit next to her, which he did.
“I never gave you my present,” whispered Ginny. She grabbed Harry’s hand and started kissing him softly, yet hard at the same time. Harry groaned and let Ginny lay on top of him.
The door opened with Hermione at its frame. She blushed at the sight of seeing Harry and Ginny making out. “Uhm… the… err…. Pancakes are ready,” muttered Hermione.
Harry blushed and softly pushed Ginny off him. Ginny seemed to have a satisfied smirk on her face as Hermione left the room. Harry scrambled after Hermione, leaving Ginny behind.
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PostPosted: August 22, 2007 2:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

you should write more. like immediatly. lol.
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PostPosted: August 22, 2007 4:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

thats tiwce harry and hermoine have been interupted lol
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PostPosted: August 22, 2007 4:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

^my bad i meant harry and ginny lol
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PostPosted: August 22, 2007 8:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

“Hermione! Hermione, wait up!” yelled Harry as he raced down the stairs.
Hermione turned around, a small blush still on her cheeks. “Yes?”
“Look… I’m so sorry about… that… what you… what happened just now,” stammered Harry.
“It’s quite alright, you’re with Ginny and I accept that. Just uhm… yeah go get your pancakes,” said Hermione.
“Right…”
Ron was in the kitchen stuffing his mouth with pancakes. Hermione looked at Ron in a disgusted manner. “Honestly Ronald close your mouth.”
“Don’t get your knickers in a knot… geez…” said Ron, swallowing his pancakes.
Ginny came downstairs into the kitchen and looked Hermione straight in the eye. Hermione didn’t meet her gaze. Harry looked at both of the girls in bewilderment. Why was Ginny being so hostile towards Hermione? Ron, however, seemed oblivious to the tension in the room. Instead, he was raving on about the Chudley Cannons.
“Blimey… imagine letting in 14 quaffles in a row. I’d be bloody embarrassed. Then again it shows real courage… they haven’t quit at it yet. I heard Skeeter’s gonna sink her claws into their seeker. Knowing her she’ll butcher the poor bloke up. Might be interesting to read though…” said Ron.
Hermione suddenly met Ginny’s gaze, looking confused. Then, as if realizing something, Hermione curtly said, “I’m not very hungry.” Hermione gave Ginny one contemptuous look then flounced away. Ginny looked angry, stabbing the bacon on the side of her plate was a clear indication of her anger. Not long after the poor bacon was smashed into pieces, Ginny stormed off without as much as a glance towards Harry or Ron. Ron stuffed a bit of toast into his mouth. “Girls are insane,” Ron said.
Harry didn’t even have time to respond. He heard Ginny yelling and Hermione yelling. Ron looked pained, as if he did not wish to get in the middle of his sister and Hermione. Reluctantly but curiously, Harry and Ron both stood up and ran to the guestroom, where Hermione and Ginny were yelling at each other. Harry noticed that Ginny was packing her things.
“You’re being unreasonable! You’re just leaving because Harry and I talk. He and I were friends before you came along!” yelled Hermione.
Ron grimaced and looked at Harry. “Sorry mate, Ginny’s sort of possessive… she’ll turn something minor into something big.”
Ginny heard Ron and instantly turned around. “Ron, I’m leaving. I can’t apparate yet though so I need to go with you or Harry by side-along apparition.”
“Ginny, what’s going on?” asked Ron.
“Nothing Ron. You’ll find out by yourself soon enough. And Harry” – Ginny looked at Harry deeply- “I already know. I’m not stupid,” said Ginny.
Harry honestly did not understand what she was talking about. “Ginny I have no clue-”
Ginny interrupted. “Then figure it out. Come on Ron.”
Ron looked confused but for once, he did not open his mouth. Instead, with a crack, he and Ginny disappeared.
Hermione didn’t move and neither did Harry. Harry felt numb and confused, he did not like this feeling. He looked towards Hermione and saw her and felt he should hug her. Yet he held back and he did not know why. Although Harry was never exactly the sensitive type, he never had a problem hugging Hermione or holding her. Yet now, as he stared at her, he saw her as he had never seen her before. Harry noticed how her bushy hair was slightly straighter, how her eyes looked so beautiful when they were filled with tears…
A loud crack interrupted Harry from his thoughts. Ron had come back. Hermione jumped and so did Harry. He felt as if he had been caught doing something wrong when in reality he had done nothing.
“Blimey Harry whatever you did it really pissed her off,” said Ron.
“I haven’t a clue what I did!” exclaimed Harry.
“It doesn’t matter okay? I need to go to Australia this week and find my parents. I looked them up online-” started Hermione.
“Where?” asked Ron.
“Never mind. The thing is I booked a flight for four… I assumed Ginny would join us but seeing as to how she’d rather be an immature little bit-,”
“Hey! That’s my sister you’re talking about!” yelled Ron.
Hermione flushed. “If you think she was right in starting a whole lot of rubbish for no reason then you can just leave Ronald Bilius Weasley!”
Angry, Ron’s eyes flashed as he glared at Hermione. “Maybe I will. But Harry’s coming with me, right Harry?” Ron’s eyes darted towards Harry.
“Ron I… I can’t leave Hermione by herself… in the forest she stayed with me all the time and I can’t just-,” started Harry.
“Fine yeah I get it. You always have to bring up when I left the stupid forest. I leave once and you never let me forget it. I reckon Ginny and I both made a mistake in ever trusting you,” said Ron coldly.
This felt like a slap to the face to Harry. He and Ron had fought once or twice before but he had never said that he regretted being his friend. Harry’s temper quickly rose. “Fine then! Leave just like you always do! Leave and this time don’t come back!”
Hermione started crying loudly and a loud crack indicated Ron had left them yet again. Only this time, it didn’t seem as bad. Harry and Hermione’s eyes met.
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PostPosted: August 22, 2007 8:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ahhh i hate cliffhangers! write more!
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PostPosted: August 22, 2007 9:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

thanks... im working on it.... but i might not be able to post it until tomorrow.
thanks everyone for the nice comments
if anyone has any suggestions please feel free
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PostPosted: August 22, 2007 9:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

“Well… I guess that…I better book the flight for two…”whispered Hermione.
“Or we could just apparate to Australia,” said Harry hopefully.
“Well maybe I suppose we could. I guess I’ve just been avoiding magic lately. It seems so… so evil that magic could’ve killed people like Fred, Tonks, and Lupin,” whispered Hermione.
Harry thought of Sirius. He thought of his parents and of Dobby. Of Lupin, Tonks, and Fred. He had lost them and now he had lost Ginny and Ron. All of this came crashing down on him like a roof collapsing. Harry sat on Hermione’s bed in the guest room where he had been with Ginny just an hour or two ago. His head slowly lowered into his palms. All he heard was silence, and then he felt Hermione right by him. Harry looked up and opened his right arm. Hermione placed herself in Harry’s arms and they fell asleep holding on to each other.




[[sorry its so short. Kinda busy ill add more later on today I believe]]
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PostPosted: August 22, 2007 9:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's really good writing, you should update! But, I am a huge R/Hr shipper...so I don't really like seeing H/Hr together and Ron gone, but your a great writer, keep it up!
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PostPosted: August 22, 2007 11:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

WTF OMG HRY WRITE MORE lol...
i always wished harry and hermione would end up together.....
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