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PostPosted: August 7, 2007 2:10 pm    Post subject: CHAPTER 5 Reply with quote

The group had made it to Hogwarts with no major incident, though Albus did fall off the boat, only to be retrieved by a long tentacle holding the back of his robe. He stayed in the middle of the boat after that.

Headmistriss McGonagall greeted them and said a speech about the rules, how to use magic, and prohibited items; which inculded three-forthes of Weasley Wizards Wheezes inventory. That is when the Sorting began.

Albus was sorted into Gryfinndor ("Another Potter?"), Rose to Gryfinndor ("Well, looks like we have another Weasley"), and Hugh to Gryfinndor. Next a few people got sorted into various House's, and it wa Scorpius's turn. He felt the hat on his head, yet it didn't speak for two long minutes. Finally it broke the agonizing silence.
"Well, what do we have here. A Malfoy. Yet he has the bravery of a Gryfinndor, wisedom of a Ravenclaw, honor of a Hufflepuff, and cunning of a Slytherin. Yet I beilieve I won't regret this decision. After all, his team may benefit from him greatly. SLYTHERIN!!!

He slowly got up, and took of his hat, trying not to make eye contact. The Slytherin's cheered and whooped, yet he tried not to here. He stayed silent throughout most of the feast, yet ironicly, two large goons thought it would benefit them if they hung up near Scorpius and listened to him.

That night, he found he shared a room with Axel Longstalk, a tall, thin, quiet boy. Marvin Smitt, one of his followers. And Rube Stein, a boisterous, crude stocky kid. Rube and Marvin spent most of the night talking animately of the girls they saw that they would date. Axel kept his curtain drawn, but he was probably sleeping. Scorpius spent the night twisting and turning in his bed, wondering why on earth was he in Slytherin? Was this how it was meant to be? What would Rose think?

Questions that could be only answered tommorrow.
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PostPosted: August 7, 2007 6:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

this is a very interesting story.
you've got me hooked.
good job!
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PostPosted: August 7, 2007 9:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you!
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PostPosted: August 8, 2007 1:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

how could u leave me hanging like that lol. excellent!
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PostPosted: August 9, 2007 4:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I expect the next installation to be out within a few hours, depending whether or not I have soccer practice this evening.

Once again, thank you for the comments. They are really encouraging.
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PostPosted: August 10, 2007 3:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

i cant wait much longer!!!!!!!!!!!! hahaha excellent work friend
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PostPosted: August 10, 2007 2:04 pm    Post subject: CHAPTER 6 Reply with quote

Scorpius was out of bed and in the Great Hall by six in the morning, slightly upset that classes didn't start until nine.
He grabbed a few pastries and wrapped them up in a napkin, taking them outside and sat on a large boulder to eat, watching the sunrise.

"Hey Scorpius!"

Rose's voice startled him, he turned around and and replied sheepishly,

"Oh, Hello Rose. I'm surprised your up so early."

"Early? I was awake at four reading textbooks. I can't wait for the first day of classes!"

Scorpius secretly admired her. It was a passion for learning they shared.

"Hey, are you hungry?" He said, offering her some danish.

"Hang on, I have something."

She rumaged through her backpack and pulled out a plate piled high with toast and waffles.

"How did..."

She smiled a mischeivous smile.

"I said I've been up reading quite early."


Soon the two were inside, the library the time when most students ate breakfast, researching minor transfiguration and what animals they would learn about. They shared Transfiguaration and Care of Magical Creatures class. When the clock in the library hit 8:45 and began shrieking "Time to go to your Class! Time to go to your Class!"

They stood, and said their byes, going to seperate first, second, and third classes. They promised to meet after lunch and said their byes, Scorpius wondering how he deserved such a great friend.
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PostPosted: August 12, 2007 11:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

good good but i personlaay like hermony loves ron more but i like the malfoy point of view
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PostPosted: August 13, 2007 4:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

cards101 wrote:
good good but i personlaay like hermony loves ron more but i like the malfoy point of view


Its not hermoine. Hermione/Ron's daughter and Malfoy daughter.
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PostPosted: August 16, 2007 7:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I except the next installment be out either tommorrow or Saturday!
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PostPosted: August 16, 2007 3:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I really like the story Smile , I think Draco's wife could have been chosen better... a relation that doesnt exist and his moms name lol, ah well not important, I love reading about the kids and its so cute how quickely they took to each other... scorpius is prolly gonna get bullied a lot by those other slytherin boys... Sad
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PostPosted: August 16, 2007 4:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

hurry up with the next chapter, i cant wait!!
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PostPosted: August 16, 2007 5:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Mags wrote:
I really like the story Smile , I think Draco's wife could have been chosen better... a relation that doesnt exist and his moms name lol, ah well not important, I love reading about the kids and its so cute how quickely they took to each other... scorpius is prolly gonna get bullied a lot by those other slytherin boys... Sad


Aw. Now I change it.

Lol. Very Happy
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PostPosted: August 17, 2007 6:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

If your reading this and the next chapter hasn't been posted.

It will be in 10 minutes!
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PostPosted: August 17, 2007 6:37 am    Post subject: Chapter 7 Reply with quote

After their little morning escape, they retreated to library where they spent the hour and a half when most students were eating breakfast.

When it was time, they hugged (they made sure the library was empty) and went to seperate classes.

First, Scorpius had Care of Magical Creatures, but as he walked to the first floor, he was stopped by a posse of Slytherins.

"Little Scorpy has a girlfriend!" he said, the obvious gangleader of the group. The rest followed with kissing noises and other taunts, though only one of them notice Scorpius pul out his wand.

"Hey uhh.. Ka-"

They were all on the floor cluctching their stomach, laughing mericlessy. Scorpius let them stay like this for a good five minutes before finally cancelling the spell and moving on. Care of Magical Creatures was enjoyable in Scorpius's opinion, though Hagrid took a disliking to him until he answered every question correct and asked about extra lessons.

The other class, Transfiguraion, was taught by Luna Longbottom, was airy and carefree. The instructer spent most of the time wandering onto different subjects. Finally, Herbology was taught by a Neville Longbottom, an fun, smart, informative teacher.

When the long three lessons where done, Scopius scarmbled to pick up his books and place them him his knapsack and ran off to the Great Hall.

"Scopius!" He turned around not to see Rose but James and Hugh, looking quite unhappy. James shoved his wand in Scorpius's face.
"What do you want with my sister?" he growled venomously.

Scorpius sighed, a picture of defeat.
"Nothing James. It was a mistake, really."
At this, James seemed to lighten up. He stowed his wand and took a step back. As quick as an Auror, he had whipped out his wand and cast, " Protego! ". The power the shield rammed full force into James and Hugh, slamming them into the wall. Both were still awake (Hugh was making rude gestures) though they weren't cornering him anytime soon.

When he finally caught up with Rose, she was in a corner quietly crying.
"Rose, are you okay? What happened?" he said gently as he stepped into the shadow of an area under the stairs. She sniffed, and told him a story on how a group of Slytherin girls attacked her, trying to "rub her out" so they would have a chance at Scorpius.

As Rose sobbed on his shoulder, Scorpius wondered who made this friendly relationship such a problem.
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PostPosted: August 17, 2007 12:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Smile I still like it, but rose isn't James' sister, but yeah its almost like snape nd lily all over again Sad , but what do u mean so they have a chance at scorpius? was it a group of girls attacking her?
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PostPosted: August 17, 2007 12:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

that is sooo mean. the slytherin girls beat up Rose so they would have a chance at Scorpius. tsk tsk
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PostPosted: August 17, 2007 3:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Mags wrote:
Smile I still like it, but rose isn't James' sister, but yeah its almost like snape nd lily all over again Sad , but what do u mean so they have a chance at scorpius? was it a group of girls attacking her?


Ok. Jame Potter's sister is Lily Potter, who is 10.

By a chance at Scorpius, that means a chance to date him.\\ Very Happy
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PostPosted: August 17, 2007 6:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ah ok so it was girls, hehe, ladies man just like his father. What did scorpius do to lily!?
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PostPosted: August 22, 2007 11:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like it, the only thing I'm confused about is who Hugh is. Is it supposed to be Hugo, because I thought Hugo wasn't going to Hogwarts until next year? But I like seeing things from Scorpio's point of view and you writing style is cool.
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PostPosted: August 22, 2007 3:38 pm    Post subject: the way i see it Reply with quote

i think the trick to it is to write like Rowling does. use her phrasing, imagery, vocab.

For example:

"As Voldemort took aim with his wand, Hagrid wrestled him to the ground, causing major back pain to the snake-like thing."

- Me

"Hagrid raised his dustbin-sized foot off the ground, and with strength worthy to a half-giant, knocked Voldemort down."

- Something Rowling would write
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PostPosted: August 23, 2007 12:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

*starts getting really impatient fpr chapter 8*
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PostPosted: August 23, 2007 9:11 pm    Post subject: Chapter 8 Reply with quote

The buzz was in the air, everyone seemed to be impatient for the upcoming event. Today was the last day of students for school until Christmas break, as well as the anticipated Winter Ball. Scorpius had spent the last hour his room, getting ready for the dance later tonight. He decided to wear his black dress robes and a pendant with a glistening shard of jade in it, a birthday present from Rose.

The party was set to begin soon, as hordes of students began to gravitate toward the Great Hall. Scorpius and Rose had decided to meet on the second floor balcony overlooking the ball. After long thought and consideration, Rose arrived in an beautiful long pale violet gown, wearing little makeup; an example of her releasing an amazing inner beauty.

"Wow Rose...you look, great."
She flashed a playful smile took Scorpius's hand.
"Thank you. You look quite stunning yourself."

It was quite true. They had become the most talked-about couple of the students in the first years. A Slytherin and a Gryfinndor? A Malfoy and a Weasley? It was unheard of. Yet completely welcome.

The ball held on late into the night, James dancing with his girlfriend, and Hugh sitting off to the side, looking quite jealous at anyone that passed with a companion. A few stubborn admirers of both Scorpius and Rose who refused to take no as an answer waited at the sides, fruitlessly waiting for a dance from one of them.

Yet it was never to happen.
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PostPosted: August 23, 2007 10:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Your writing is good, I like the idea of weasley and malfoy's kid together. But I want to ask again, who is Hugh???
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PostPosted: August 24, 2007 7:09 am