I figured that because I probably can't fit it on here I can show you from the site itself, it does have quite a few chapters but it is a very good read.
Just a small note, she is a bit afraid of critisiscm and will stand up for her story defensively.
Its a bit dry at first and she can have an ego, it doens't help she does the whole goth thing, but she is subtle about little snips here and there. She also shines through with her use of words and good understanding of character building and only occasional canon. I think her only problem is that there is too much action. I hope you enjoy the story as much as I did, it is so great that one of her online friends had to make a site dedicating it.
Sadly deleted due to being in wrong section, so it was reuploaded a while later.
Edit: Don't be shy, tell me what you think about it, If you don't like it, telll me why.
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