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Wizardmaster752
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PostPosted: July 19, 2007 9:04 pm    Post subject: I wrote a book..... Reply with quote

i just recently wrote a book that will turn into a 7 book series, that somewhat has the same theme as in harry potter, like curses,wands,wizard,and witches. i also have something like the deatheaters but they are called dragors, and support the evil wizard named Slaither. So pretty much the story is pretty heavy so i will just explain it in small words.

There are 7 realms in a world called Mystia, and these realms each have 7 portals and different habitats,environment,animals,and people.So in those 7 realms there are also 7 portals in which corrupted and evil wizards and witches come out from and the other side is pretty much hell, and thats were Slaither conjures his allies and stuff, like the dragors.

Anyways the mosters that are coming out of the portals cause major destruction in the world and this one kid which is born is sort of the chosen one, to destroy the portals and kill Slaither. So this boy grows up not knowing anything that is going on because his parents died from a fire and he now lives in an orphanage. So this old man named Rowen tells him hes the chosen one and all and now he is set on his epic quest. So this kids name is Serge, so serge trains up to be a strong wizard, and learns all types of spells and stuff.

So serge only has his trusty wand that Rowen gave him and then slaither kills rowen,and serge speeds up his traning to be the most powerful wizard,and wants to have revenge on slaither. but serge must travel his way to destroy all 7 portals,and only starts his journey when he is 16.

But slaither sort of controls serges mind and makes him kill people and corrupts serge but serge overcomes the mind control and sets on his quest again, and also makes friends along the way, but confronts his darkest fears to destroy the 7 portals and possible risk his life to kill slaither.

well yea thats sort of the whole story, i kno its really confusing but i already finished all 7 books, but theres still a lot of editing to do,and also wanted to ask if the plot and theme is sort of copying into harry potters plot, espicially with like slaither and the dragors and stuff but im just wondering. And if i get lucky my books might get published in stores.

So, yea really long post but i just wanted u to leave any comments on my series,and if u have any questions just ask.
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skinny_bones4
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PostPosted: July 19, 2007 10:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow, let me know when its published.
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Zachary
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PostPosted: July 20, 2007 12:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice man when is it out?
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Cacti
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PostPosted: July 24, 2007 3:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sounds good, but sounds like a Harry Potter copy.
Just change the lore around a bit to make it your own.
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Jared Tom Riddle
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PostPosted: July 24, 2007 5:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

When I was younger I was writing fairytales about princesses and princes. Maybe some day I'll write also something but now I really don't have the time for such things.
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vegable
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PostPosted: July 24, 2007 6:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

no offence but it sounds exactly like HP, Rowen - Rowena.
7 horcruxes - 7 portals
Slaither - reminds me of slytherin
boys parents die
old mna com es to the orphanage and tells him hes a wizard/chosen one - voldie?

sounds an ok story though, may give me a bit of deja vu

what are they gonna be called?
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Túrin Turambar
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PostPosted: July 24, 2007 1:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Are these other realms by any chance planes of oblivion (from the elder scrolls) lol like to give them a read tho how long are they?
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Duelingwands
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PostPosted: July 27, 2007 4:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It sounds a lot lik the HP series. consider changing quite a bit of things around, not just the wordplay (Serge?)
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this is interesting.
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abanoub
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PostPosted: July 27, 2007 9:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

okay it is a rip off of the pendragon series and harry potter series. sorry dude but you should be more original
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ilovedan38
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PostPosted: July 31, 2007 4:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

it's good, but it sounds way too similar to harry potter.
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