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--An Ode To Sirus--(and Fred)------

 
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Luna_is_my_savor
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PostPosted: August 11, 2007 6:04 pm    Post subject: --An Ode To Sirus--(and Fred)------ Reply with quote

My poetry about Harries loss of Sirus.


---Sirus---

Oh my,
Sirus why did you have to die?
Leaving me crumpled against the doorway,
Crying and living on my cries.
For you were my parent,
My best freind,
And my dog.
But now your gone,
Sirus, I should have known it all along.

EVERYTHING I KNOW!
EVERYTHING I LOVE!
FALLS DOWN AROUND ME-
I hear the calling sound of a dove.

Of course I could never say this-
Aloud, or even to my freinds,
For even though they gripe and moan,
There hearts will mend.

Save me Sirus,
Take me away,
Don't leave me crumpled,
I SHOULDN'T HAVE TO HAVE YOU AS MY BANE!

and now the pain is doubled as I hear you speak-
I hear you talk,
I see you walk
and I feel your warmth,
and sometimes I think I see you-
but its nought but a shadow on the wall.

Sirus, I swear the time that we get through,
I'll kill the one who killed you.

Belllatrix, THE MONSTER
THE EVIL ONE, THE SNAKE
BELATRIX IM GOING TO KILL YOU
Snap your body in half and watch it break.

Oh Sirus.
I miss you,
Padfoot.
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likeaname
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PostPosted: August 11, 2007 6:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I applaud you.
I thought it was pretty good Very Happy
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Luna_is_my_savor
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PostPosted: August 11, 2007 7:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks. ;D
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Miluna
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PostPosted: August 11, 2007 9:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

*sobs*
*cries*
*sniffles*
*sobs again*

That was beautiful! I miss Sirius!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*cries*
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PostPosted: August 12, 2007 4:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I miss Sirius too....that was pretty good!! Very Happy
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Duelingwands
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PostPosted: August 12, 2007 7:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow, that was very well written. It touched me..

Applause
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heh.

this is interesting.
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Love_Like_Winter
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PostPosted: August 12, 2007 4:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Aww...that was really good Razz
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Luna_is_my_savor
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PostPosted: August 15, 2007 5:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

---//The Merry Prankster's last Laugh----///
--AN ODE TO FRED---

OH THE MERRY PRANKSTER,
What a dark and unforgiving cold-
It can swipe you off your feet,
and allow you to die before coming old.

Oh in the midst of the battle,
many die,
forgotten in death.
but I SAW YOU DIE-
I saw your body- there was nothing left.

Your last laugh eched apoun your face,
you caved in too brotherhood's sometimes failing embrace,
and as the dark, the utter silence of battle closed in,
You fell into oblivion,
your face never again to grin.


You left us,
you left us,
crying for,
your
last laugh.


You left us,
you left us,
crying for,
your
last laugh.


Fred,
the merry prankster's,
last laugh.
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likeaname
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PostPosted: August 15, 2007 9:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

wow.
liked that one too.
kinda dramatic.
and saddd. Sad
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Miluna
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PostPosted: August 16, 2007 9:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Praying Crying Crying Crying Crying Crying Crying Crying Crying Crying Crying Crying Crying Crying Crying Crying Crying Crying Crying Crying Crying Crying

Thank you, you made me cry. In a good way. I'm also praying for Fred and Sirius! Thank you. These are so touching, and I'm really sensitive. I love them. You're a great writer.
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