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HARRY/HERMIONE fanfic * UPDATE! * chap two is here!

 
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^^Milky Way^^
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PostPosted: August 12, 2007 4:07 pm    Post subject: HARRY/HERMIONE fanfic * UPDATE! * chap two is here! Reply with quote

hi guys, i love to read the stories that you guys made up with the characters and it was soooo interesting that i decided to make-up one of my one! enjoy!
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PostPosted: August 12, 2007 4:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Where is it? Lol..
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PostPosted: August 12, 2007 5:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This is after Deathly Hallows, but only Voldy and his death eaters died!
so that means that Snape, Fred, Lupin and Tonks are alive.


SUMMARY: After DH, everybody thinks that Ron and Hermione got married, but this fanfic tells a whole new story!

Chapter One: Spin the Bottle

When Voldemort was defeated by Harry Potter, the whole wizarding world celebrated.
The story takes place in the castle, where Harry, Ron and Hermione is allowed to stay untill they figured out where to go. Lavender was shouting Ron's name while running down the corridor.

"Ron!" "Ron!"
The trio turned around and saw Lavender running towards them.
When she finally reached them, she asked Ron, "Hey Ron, do you want to play a muggle game?" she said with a twinkle in her eye, totally ignoring Hermione and Harry.

"Sure~~ Lavender, what game is it?" said Hermione, with a look of suspiction on her face.

"I think it is called Spin the Sottle?, or something like that." she said back without taking her eyes off of Ron.

"You mean Spin the Bottle, don't you Lavender?" said Hermione

"Oh, did I say that there is going is going to be food?" totally ignoring what Hermione said with her eyes still foucused on Ron.

"Well, thats good enough for me, I'm going!" said Ron happily, walking toward the Gryffindor Tower. Harry and Hermione looked at each other, shugged their shoulders then followed him, running trying to keep up with him.

End of Chap. 1

how did you guys like it? plz tell me what i could do to improve! i am working on Chap.2
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PostPosted: August 12, 2007 5:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Interesting. Its different, but I think its very good"
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heh.

this is interesting.
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PostPosted: August 12, 2007 6:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

thanks Duelingwands
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PostPosted: August 12, 2007 10:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's interesting i agree, it's coming from a different angle.

Could be a wee bit longer.
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PostPosted: August 12, 2007 11:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ok the erotic section is somewhere else
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PostPosted: August 15, 2007 11:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for the comments you guys!

Next chapter


Chapter 2. Unbelivable Moment


When the four Gryffindors reached their tower, all their Gryffindor friends was around this small, round table. And what layed on that round table was a butterbeer bottle that had already been drinken from.

"Alright, who spins the bottle first?" said Fred in a challening voice while looking at everyone. But everyone seemed very reluctant to go first.

"Oh, come on everyone!" said Nearly Headless Nick. "You are supposed to be Gryffindors!", "Remember, the sorting hat said Gryffindors, brave at heart?", he said looking at them with a disappointing look, he looked at them one more time, then he floated off somewhere in the castle.

"Oh, fine!" "I will go first then!" said Lavender excitedly.

"Then put your wand in this box," said George. "It's magic-proof so you can't bewitch it, so its all on luck!" said Fred finishing George's sentence.

"Brilliant!" said Harry and Ron together.

"Well, umm, ok I guess I will spin then." said Lavender with a sad frown on her face, looking nervous.

She spun the bottle, it spun around, and around. Everyone seemed to stop breathing. Then finally, is started to slow down. Then it stopped on...Seamus. Lavender looked like she wanted to puke, but she kissed him on the lips. Everyone was lauging and joking around after that kiss. After kiss and more kisses, it was Ron's turn. He spun the bottle extra hard hoping it would land on Hermione, but instead landed, the girl right next to him, Katie Bell.

While he kissed her, Hermione looked away and one of the twins wolf-whistled. When that kiss was done, it was Hermione's turn. she spun it and everyone was looking at it. It spun round and round and finally landed on, Harry.

He was watching the bottle too, but when someone said his name, he just kinda relized that the bottle landed on him. He looked up and everyone was lookig at him and Hermione. She was blushing extra hard.

"Umm, well, um, Harry shall we..." she was studdering a lot, "umm, you
know
. whe said finally.

"Uhh, yeah, I guess." said Harry akwardly.

So they hesitentley met in the middle. Then finally, they were so close, they could feel each others breath.

"Well, here goes nothing!" Hermione said whispering, so only Harry could hear, then their lips met.






End of Chap. 2, if you have any ideas for chap. 3, pm me with the title:

FANFIC HH!

thanks for reading! Very Happy
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PostPosted: August 15, 2007 11:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

its kind of totally different and why is voldimort not in on the spin da bottle Wink
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PostPosted: August 15, 2007 12:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

cards101 wrote:
its kind of totally different and why is voldimort not in on the spin da bottle Wink


i would put him in there, but then he would complain that bellatrix wasn't there! Laughing
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PostPosted: August 15, 2007 5:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

^^Milky Way^^ wrote:
cards101 wrote:
its kind of totally different and why is voldimort not in on the spin da bottle Wink


i would put him in there, but then he would complain that bellatrix wasn't there! Laughing


ROFL

Too funny
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this is interesting.
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PostPosted: August 15, 2007 9:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

LOL, this is pretty good.

More writeing please - i like the comedy!
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PostPosted: August 15, 2007 9:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

o and where is grawp Confused
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PostPosted: August 16, 2007 4:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

he couldnt find the bike bell, he probably sallowed it! Very Happy
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PostPosted: August 23, 2007 12:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

where is chap. 3???? Sad
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PostPosted: August 25, 2007 5:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like this story....when are you going to post again?
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