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The Magical Man-Episode 1

 
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Mark Jiro
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PostPosted: July 6, 2008 12:58 am    Post subject: The Magical Man-Episode 1 Reply with quote

In the time of our offspring there was once a boy named Tubata. He's the only boy who has the power of bravery, power of creativity, and power of cleverness in their own town.There are 5 towns who were their founders are now dead.In the town Procupet, Fred Procupet. In the town of Helena,Splety Helena.In the town of Spinger,Roxy Spinger.In the town of Trerr,Tibolos Trerr.In the town of Hoxcruse,Wellty Hoxcruse and the last one.In the town of Philemon,Larry Philemon.After the conversation ,they have plan that they will give their town using their own Lastname
And the story begin to spark when Tubata found the "Edifice of the 5 Founders".So,when Tubata found that edifice it occured to him that he stumled in the valley and found himself bloody and full of scar.

Poured with blood ,fine with salty water and dash with own sweat.
Thats the last word that werw written in the edifice.The explanation of that statement says that the 5 founders pour their blood with great force so that the curse,the everlasting curse. with be effective to all.Fine with salty water.Thats the 2nd statement that says they will fine their body with the salty water to symbolize purity of their minds. Dash with own sweat.It says that they shed their own sweat because of the labors they suceeded

After Tubata have read the edifice.he can now see the clear sky,the lemon-smelled horizon and the waving green green grass.As he stare in their fields,the silhoutte of the his mother appeared to him. He was thinking her mother who have died in war.He can see in his mind that her mother was petrified by the rude soldier.

Ans then he was just wondering why her mother was being killed and not him. Probably that's the state of his wondrous mind.

He finally think to go back in his own home to rest his mind.Going up,down,jump,swing,fly and at last theres now the place where he lives in.
"Hello mother how are you?Are you still thinking os the crime that they did to you?.Mother please be considerate 'bout it.Ill be the one who will revenge their own hearts and minds.So be calm mother.Good night"he kisses.And then he finally go to the rattan bedroom to take his sleep.

Dreaming in the horizon, he dreams to be in the deep horizon with a smell of lemon.He said"wow im now in the Horizon!".As he go down in the horizon he can see his mother alive and pure blooded."My mother my mother,how could you be alive in my place?"..

And then the dream was ended when the first cocking of rooster start.
....to be continued
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PostPosted: July 10, 2008 7:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

it was pretty good.
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PostPosted: July 10, 2008 8:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I liked the beginning of your story and am curious as to why the dream of the horizon smelled like lemons. Hmmmm interesting.
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