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LoenaLeeflang
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PostPosted: May 7, 2008 8:43 am    Post subject: release the hiders. Reply with quote

I can still make this story better and so, but I just wondered what people would think of it so please react Wink


After the big battle, something fell weird. They were happy off course. Voldemort was finally killed. But the feeling of “what now? ” kept a feeling of emptiness. They needed a new Minister of Magic. A lot changed, and had to change. They did know the first thing they had to do was to let everyone know what had happened.
The first thing they were going to do is to publish in every way they could think of. They sent out million owls, and let everyone know on the radio and newspaper. They also had to help everyone to release the people in hiding. That is a lot of work, million of people were hiding. A lot of which they had no idea why, let’s hope they have a radio.
Because this was of course a lot of work, they asked anyone who was interested in helping. This did include a lot of children, but all help could be used. They sent some 7th years Hogwarts students to help some people who were hiding in known places. Like the muggle minister, and Harry’s family. They seemed like smart kids; Cho Chang, Luna, Mariette and Dan.
They first went to the family of Harry ,Although Harry had no need to see his uncle and aunt, he still thought he should go along. Ginny insisted to go along, and all the way she kept close to Harry and keeping an eye on Cho Chang. When they arrived there they saw it was more of cave. Harry was laughing by the thought that they have been there all alone. When they went in the cave they noticed this huge wall .Luna got a description with all the spells she should cast in the wall. All of a sudden, the wall had turned into something that looked like the front of a house. Harry recognized this house, it looked exactly like the house that he had lived in for so many years. They knocked on the door, they didn’t get any response at first. After a few seconds the door went open, and a boy a bit taller than Harry was standing in the port way. He was a bit muscular, especially on his chest. He had long dark brown hair, and was wearing a bit messy cloths. As if he had not washed them for months, but used them pretty well though. Apart from that the clothes seem to be very messy, they also seemed way to big. Harry had the idea he looked familiar but he couldn’t think who he was. He had this anxious look on his face, he asked; “who are you?” .Then he looked at Harry, “Harry! At last a familiar face!”. Harry now knew who he was, he recognized his voice. Although it didn’t sound the same as it used to, his voice sounded much kinder, terrified, braver, but also very relieved. “Do you have any news? “Dudley asked. “you must have, what I have heard and all is that Harry doesn’t seem to appear so much”. “Harry had killed him !” Cho Chang shouted in a cheery way. Dudley started to hug Harry, Harry was a bit overwhelmed by this. “They helped too” Harry said. He more started to realize again that Harry wasn’t the only visitor there. He looked around and looked at Cho, “So you have helped too?” he gave her a hug too, he turned totally red and soon gave a hug to the rest too .“come in!”. “Mum, he is dead!” . Harry saw his aunt coming “is Harry dead?”. “No mum, Voldemort”. Dudley sounded completely different. Harry was also still amazed that he talked about Voldemort, and that he looked so much different, of what he used to look. Petunia jumped up in the sky, she started shouting, and dropped the plate of cookies in her hand. She saw Harry, “have you killed Voldemort?”. “well I said the spell, but I didn’t do it on my..” Petunia interrupted “Are we now free to go? This maybe look exactly like our house, but it isn’t and we haven’t come out since we have came here. We want to see..” She stopped. “where is uncle Vernon?”. Petunia sighed, “well, he wasn’t so happy about the hiding. He kind of went away, but never came back. We haven’t of heard anything of him, we don’t know what happened to him.. what if he is..”. “I’ll help you find him.” Petunia was a bit shocked by this. “why, may I ask do you want to help us? I don’t even know you”. “I like to help, and your story sounds so sad, let me help you”. “Well I don’t know if that is a good idea”. “come on!” Dudley had awaked. “We have no chance of finding him by ourselves. We need some eh.. Magical help. One of the things we have learned of the past months is that wizard and witches aren’t so bad after all. If she wants to help, let her help” . Dudley blushed again, and Cho Chang smiled the same way at him, as she used to smile at Harry.

I got inspiration for this story of the thread "I know who Cho Chang married.."
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ray_30579
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PostPosted: May 7, 2008 12:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice story, just tell the story.
No need to explain everything right away.
You can do that during the storytelling itself.
(Anders leest hij niet "lekker") Smile
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LoenaLeeflang
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PostPosted: May 7, 2008 2:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ray_30579 wrote:
Nice story, just tell the story.
No need to explain everything right away.
You can do that during the storytelling itself.
(Anders leest hij niet "lekker") Smile

OMG Dutch .. I was just afraid people wouldnt understnad it otherwise.. (ik was gewoon bang dat het anders niet te begrijpen was xD)
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