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The Kiss. (Poem.)

 
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Cedric Diggory
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PostPosted: April 24, 2008 7:43 pm    Post subject: The Kiss. (Poem.) Reply with quote
I know its not the best. But I try, so all appreciation is welcome.

Harry had to do it.
He had to.
He didnt know when.
He didnt know what time.
He didnt know what place.
But he knew he had to do it.
He saw her.
The love of his life.
It was his time.
It was the time for it.
Right now.
Harry ran up.
He followed through..
He ran up.. And...
Harry Kissed her..
Harry kissed Ginny..
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FWFreedomfighter
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PostPosted: April 26, 2008 3:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
it's not bad.... better than i would've done, i'll tell you that much
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FirstStrikeForce
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Location: Australia
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PostPosted: May 11, 2008 5:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Yes! Thank you Cedric for understanding Harry/Ginny, whoopieee!
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beef.
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PostPosted: May 18, 2008 8:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Good job! Like FW said, it's way better than any poem I've ever written. I'm a terrible poet. ^_^

Just one thing. He followed threw should be He followed through.

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FirstStrikeForce
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PostPosted: May 18, 2008 9:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
^Pshaw... spelling spelling spelling..
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