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It was 3 weeks after the Battle of Hogwarts and Ron, Harry, and Hermione were just relaxing at The Burrow.

"Blimey im bored" Ron said.

"You should really practice that hex I told you about" said Hermione.

"Nahhh, Harry you wanna go out side for a bit of Quidditch?" ask Ron

"Sure!" exclaimed Harry "I'll get my Firebolt"

"Ron Really!"shouted Hermione. "That hex can come in handy you know"

"Relax Hermione, remember all the death eaters and You-Know-Who are gone!" said Ron happily.

"Your STILL scared of saying Voldemort's name Ron?" said an amused Harry.

"It's only been 3 weeks Harry sheesh." Ron said grumpily "Well ill be waiting Harry!"

And with that Ron ran off to get his Cleansweep.

For the first time in a LONG time, Harry and Hermione were alone. It was a bit awkard oddly...
Harry stared at Hermione and their eyes met.
Harry never realized how beautifully brown her eyes were....
And Hermione never realized how green his eyes were.....
Then Hermione finally broke the silence by saying, "I think...Ron might be waiting Harry..."

"O right.."
and with that he ran off....

What both of them didnt know was that they were both thinking the same thing...
what was that weird feeling in their hearts?

Hermione knew what it was before Harry and started to cry...
She didn't know what to do and who to tell.
She loved Ron but now came to realize that she also loved Harry.

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Outside was a 2v2 Quidditch match. George and Ron vs Harry and Ginny.
Harry was doing bad because he couldn't stop thinking about what the feeling was inside his heart about Hermione. He thought it was a familiar feeling........

"WOOOOO! Nice one Ron!"

"Harry what are you doing!" shouted Ginny flying his way.

"Huh?"

"Honestly Harry, your not think about a GIRL are you?" Teased Ginny.

"Haha of course not!"

Even as he said this, there he felt an uncomfortable feeling that made him squirm....

"Errr I'm going to get a drink, I'll be back..."

Harry flew down to the ground and headed to the kitchen. There already was Hermione in deep thoughts. When he walked in, she looked up.

"H-He-Hey" stuttered Harry.

"Hello" Hermione said quietly. "Look Harry we have to talk"

first part OVER
first time writing a fan fic
what u think? and be honest so i can do better next time

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It wasn't bad, i actually would like to know what happens next. You just need a little more detail. Like who was playing 2 versus 2. i know harry ron and ginny, but who else, and where were they?

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CHAPTER 2 ADDED....leave comments cmon ppl

"Huh? ab-about what?" Harry said nervously.

"Well you see Harry...earlier on today....I...I....felt something...about you"

Harry's palm was getting wet really fast and he felt like the air was choking him.

"I ...think i love you Harry!"

Harry stood there without speaking until Hermione had to speak again.

"Harry are you ok?"ask Hermione.

"er..yea..yea im fine..." stammered Harry. "It's just I'm a bit shocked."

"Well Harry I just HAD to get that off my chest...I just want to know...how do you feel about me?"

Before Harry could speak, Ginny walked in.

"Harry where were you! I had to play against both Ron and George!"

And then Ron and George came in looking blank.

"Bloody hell, I can't believe we lost!"said a astonished Ron.

"Haha that teaches YOU to underestimate girls." said Ginny with a smirk."Well I'm off to rest, bye!"

She kissed Harry while Ron looked away and ran upstairs. George also went upstairs mumbling something about a new candy that shrinks the head of the eater. Harry sat down and wondered what on Earth he was going to do. Ron was excitingly talking to Hermione who only seemed to half listen to him. She was actually looking strangely at Harry with a twinkle in her eye.

Harry couldn't stand it anymore and excused himself to Ron's room to think about what to do about Hermione and Ginny.
He loved Ginny and that was a fact, but he also was starting to grow some new feelings for Hermione. He was so confused, it felt like he he was going to blow up.

As he was deep in his thought, someone crept up to him. The shadow jumped on him with a scream. Harry jumped up and caught crookshanks.

"HOLY SHI- ...o its you crookshanks....whew you scared me!"

He pet the cat for about half an hour until someone opened the door. Hermione walked in looking for the gingercat. She sat down at the base of the bed without talking.

"Look Harry I think you should just forget about what i said earlier..."

Harry was bewildered. She made him explode with thoughts and when he FINALLY reached a conclusion, she told him to forget about it? Nope he was not going to take it.

"I'm sorry harry for putting you in an awkwa-"

"Forget it Hermione, I just want to ask u something....did you really mean what u said?"

Hermione had a confused look as she nodded slowly....

"Well Hermione then I just wanted to tell you one thing.....I like you too Hermione."

Hermione just sat there for what seemed like an eternity until she gave a loud yelp and jumped on Harry. Harry was so surprised he threw Crookshanks all the way to the ceiling. It was a good thing cats have nine lives or he would have been a goner.

Hermione held on to him tightly and after a couple seconds, Harry returned the embrace.

"Er... Harry?"

"Yea?"

"...What about Ginny and Ron?"

Harry sighed as he got up."Yea I was just wondering the same thing..If we tell them, we'll probably get kicked out of the Burrow and I doubt they'll talk to us ever again...."

"We need to come up with a plan"mumbled Hermione more to herself rather then Harry.

TO be continued...
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Posts: 2535 · Posted: August 24, 2007 5:56 pm Post subject:

It's good, you should update. Your a good writer.
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yay! thnx.. i prolly will but ima wait for some more comments
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Posts: 3895 · Posted: August 26, 2007 8:44 am Post subject:

Your a very good writer. I want to see how this plays out. WRITE More!
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Harry was laying on his bed with his eyes wide open. He was thinking about Hermione when Ron gave a particularly loud snore. He looked in the direction of where Ron lay. He felt extremely guilty about it to Ron, but could just not help it. He lay thinking for a few more minutes staring out the window until he saw a red spark go up in the air. He smiled and grabbed his invisibility cloak. He silently got up and headed out to the garden. He went into the surrounding forest and saw the sign in a nearby tree. He tapped the tree with his wand and the side opened up. Looking around, he silently went in.

Before his eyes could get used to the inside, someone jumped on him.

"Hermione! Gosh you scared me!"

Giggling Hermione dragged Harry into a couch.

"I still can't believe you did all this" said Harry looking around.

"O it was nothing...Just the same spell for this like the tent we used at the Quidditch World Cup.

Smiling even more Harry kissed her in the lips. Hermione giggled even more and returned the love.

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Harry woke up the next day very tired. Yawning loudly he head down stairs into the kitchen. The whole family was at work and Mrs. Weasley went to visit some friends. When Harry went into the kitchen, he saw Ginny and Ron looking grim and Hermione cheery right when she saw him.
Harry saw Ron head to Hermione trying to give her a hug. He didn't know what happened because he turned around to the refrigerator but he knew something went wrong because he saw Ron have a hurt face.

After breakfast, Ron pulled Harry into his room.

"Harry I need your help!"

Puzzled, Harry asked about what.

"Harry, it's Hermione!....She seems to be....distant from me.....Harry help me! What am I doing wrong? You can help because you and Ginny seem so happy!"

Harry shifted uncomfortably in his bed. He could not help but feel guilty becuase HE was the reason why Hermione was so distant.

"Errrr Ron I really don't know what to tell you..."

Ron sighed and heaved himself onto his bed.

"It's ok Harry...I just wanted to talk about it."

"Is there anything I can do for you?"

"No it's ok...Just leave me alone for a bit."

Harry walked slowly out and headed downstairs. There he met Ginny who seemed to be crying. Harry walked to her and asked her what was wrong.

"Harry....come with me...."

Ginny walked outside and Harry followed her. As he was walking he saw Hermione storm upstairs. He was worried that she might be mad. They sat on a long rock. They sat their for a few moments until Harry heard sobs. He turned and saw Ginny crying.

"What's wrong Ginny?" he said worried.

Ginny cried some more before she said,"Harry I saw you......yesterday night with Hermione!"
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Harry gaped at Ginny.

"Bu-But how?"

"I saw you come out, or rather heard you. And I also saw the footsteps you made in the grass. I saw the opening tree and used a new spell I learned. Yernendo, it's a spell that allows me to see through objects."

Ginny kept sobbing as she was talking and Harry could not look at her straight in the eye. Ginny continued.

"What i saw....was...was...horrible yet I was prepared for it."

Harry blinked."Prepared...what do you mean?"

"I sense something was wrong with you Harry. You were so...far away. I was even more convinced when Hermione shines like the sun when you are near." Ginny answered.

"Ginny...I...I'm sorry..I really am. I still love you, I really do! but...I also have feelings for Hermione and for that I'm sorry."

Ginny chuckled and said, " It...It's ok Harry...well not really but what can i do...."

They sat for a few minutes in silence.

Harry broke the silence.

"Well...Ginny...I think we should head back..."

"Yea Harry...but before that...."

Ginny got up and bent low over Harry.

"Harry....can you do me a favor? Before we break up....let's...have one more night of fun."

And with that they kissed.

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Harry came out of the woods half and hour in a daze. He felt guilty about it to Hermione but knew he had to for Ginny. Not that he didn't enjoy it......
Harry got to the door of The Burrow when it burst open. Ron stood there with a furious look on his face.

"KENDERISCO"

A brilliant white light flashed and Harry was thrown high, high into the air. He flew all the way into the forest knocked out. As he flew, he thought he heard a high pitched scream.

Really short but a good place to leave off lol
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Posts: 554 · Posted: August 28, 2007 5:28 pm Post subject:

oooooo, twist. Ron's not going to be pleased....
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ooooo i like it. a little twist. CAn't wait to read more!

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im a big harry/ginny person and this still caught my attention. please update.

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It's not brilliant, but still pretty good, more please Very Happy

You can also check my harry/hermione story out, i made it a while ago, its called "Between Dreams And Reality"
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alright guys ima work on chap 5 RIGHT now !
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Harry groaned and he slowly opened his eyes. He saw trees soar high into the sky. He tried to get up but someone pushed him back down.

"Harry you should lie still for a lil longer."

Harry turned his head and saw Hermione sitting there with heavy bags under her eyes. He smiled as he pulled a couple of leaves from her bushy hair.

"Hermione how long have I been here?"

Hermione quietly answered," Well....It was last Wednesday that you were blasted away and today is....Thursday..."

"So I've been out for a day?"

"Errrr...No....A week and a day."

Harry gasped out loud and got up. Oddly he didn't feel so hungry.

"So...what happened while I was out? ALSO, how did Ron find out?"

Hermione breathed deeply.

"Well, I saw you and Ginny go into the forest and I thought that you were gonna tell her....you did right?"

Harry nodded and did not tell her what else happened.

"Um..so yea..I saw you go and I thought that I should clean things up with Ron too. I first told him we should break up and he was really sad and clingy. But when I told him it was because of you, he got really mad and started pacing while ranting out loud. I glanced at the window and saw you coming out. Obviously Ron did too because he swiftly looked and started running down the stairs. I didn't know what he was going to do so I chased after him but by the time I got there, I already saw you flying."

Harry nodded and sat quietly on the ground. What was he going to do now? As if reading his mind, Hermione broke the silence.

"Harry I think it's best if we leave the Burrow."

Harry once again nodded and stood up.

"I think it's best if we do it ASAP."

Hermione also nodded and they started to walk towards the Burrow. In a few minutes they reached it. They held their breathes and opened the door. Sitting on the couch was Mrs. Weasley drinking a fire whiskey. Ginny was in the kitchen with her head on the kitchen table. Ron was no where to be seen. As if on cue. Ron came thundering down the stairs. When he saw them, he quickly went back up the stairs. As Harry and Hermione slowly walked to the stairs, Ron came back down. He heaved Harry and Hermione's trunks on the floor.

"Get your trunks and GET OUT!" Ron shouted.

"What about Hedwig...."Harry said silently

"I sent Hedwig on already and i put the cage in your trunk shrunken."

Silently Harry grabbed both his and Hermione's trunks and walked slowly to the door. Before he go out he said.

"I hope we can still be friends."

And with that he walked out. Hermione looked at Ron and said,"I'm...sorry."

She then also walked out.

Harry walked quickly so it took Hermione a few seconds to catch up. When they got to the main street, Harry held up his wand. A few moments later the Knight bus came roaring.

"Where to?" said a thin around 60's woman said.

It took Harry a few moments to think but then he said," Grimmauld Place."
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Posts: 1307 · Posted: September 15, 2007 10:33 pm Post subject:

keep posting, it is going really good!! plz!!!
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