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Posts: 37 · Joined: Jul 24, 2007 Posts: 37

http://jazzy3113.blogspot.com/

Be kind, I write alot but this is the first time I have written Harry Potter story.

Posts: 1245 · Posted: August 27, 2007 8:34 am Post subject:

Why can't you just write it in Flourish and Blots?
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Posts: 13950 · Posted: August 27, 2007 9:03 am Post subject:

he should of died like the dramtic death like

i musint go to the light ahhh

save your selfs etc
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I cant do this alll on my own because im no superman...

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Posts: 7692 · Joined: Aug 11, 2007 Location: With Ron ? Posts: 7692

I liked how he died .
Perfect .
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Posts: 6120 · Joined: Jul 21, 2007 Location: philadelphia<3 Posts: 6120

I didn't mind how he died much, but good job in writing that. It was really good Smile

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Posts: 928 · Posted: August 29, 2007 11:48 pm Post subject:

I think he should have had a dramatic death, like jumping in front of Harry when Voldemort sent the killing curse at him or something lol
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Posts: 4002 · Joined: Jul 23, 2007 Location: In da A-T-L yo Posts: 4002

well if he hadn't died how he died, then the elder wand wouldn't have been explained wee enough in the book.

Posts: 6660 · Joined: Nov 29, 2006 Posts: 6660

!Moved to Florish & Blots.
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Through victory my chains are broken.

Posts: 37 · Joined: Jul 24, 2007 Posts: 37

When I tried to type it in here, it said the post was too long. So then I tried to post it in sections but I prefer reading other people's work in one continuous fashion, so I made the blog just to make this one post.
I tried to write it so it could easily have been the last half of the Elder Wand Chapter.
Harry still got Snape's memories, Voldemort still killed Snape so he thought the Elder Wand was his, Lucius got embaresses cause hes a punk, and Snape got the death I thought he deserved.

Posts: 139 · Joined: Aug 29, 2007 Location: Canada Posts: 139

Although Snape's written death in DH explained the whole Elder Wand bit...I feel as if it wasn't enough for a character who had so much going for him. He was a bold character with a lot surrounding him and had connections to many things in the plot line.

I did love how JK ended Snape's death but I still wish he could have had something more dramatic (perhaps a jumping in front of Harry scene or something xD ) or perhaps, could have lengthened her death scene a bit more?

But even so, chapter 33; The Prince's Tale, diminished all of my "HE NEEDED A BETTER DEATH ROWLING" thoughts Razz

Edit: Your story flowed, in my opinion, quite nicely. The description brought it all together also :]
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Posts: 37 · Joined: Jul 24, 2007 Posts: 37

thanks for the reply......do you think i should just post it in this thread because some people do not like the link

Posts: 521 · Posted: August 31, 2007 2:08 am Post subject:

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