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lionspaw-ravensclaw
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PostPosted: September 24, 2007 8:42 pm    Post subject: Binboah. Chapter. Reply with quote

Introduction


Love is bold in this place. Nothing has been right before,everything is changing. This town had magic everywhere, it was for the graduated wizards and witches from Hogwrarts and this is where the biggest graveyard ever alies. Harry Potter's parents are here, you might say theyre in the real world but there spirits stay in that town. This town is called Binboah Alley.


Chapter 1- Greg.
One young boy sits there in a gaze. Wondering if he'll ever go to Hogwarts school of Witchcraft and Wizardry. His name was Gregory Sweptche. He was a young, poor boy in need to go to school but, he was like Harry Potter, he had no parents, but this time, he knew it wasnt Voldemort. He thought it was Harry's dead Godfather, Serius Black, but apparently not. No body knows about him or the murderer. All the town knows is that his parents were killed when he was 1, the same day that Harry's parents passed.
Greg had been brave, trying to pay everything on his own,only at the age of 10. He'll try to do anything he can, in the town of Binboah Alley, the main magical town in the world.
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To be continued... Chapter 2- The parents.
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Icefire
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Joined: Jul 29, 2007
Location: Biding my time until I see him again....
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PostPosted: September 25, 2007 7:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like it, Karli! Can I call you karli on here?

Anyway, that was pretty good, I'm intrigued as to where this will go. I'll keep reading it, but if you want others to do so as well, the chapters are going to have to be a little longer. Short chapters are sometimes frustrating. Just a little friendly advice.

Still, intriguing.....Very Happy
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