Please tell me what you think. This is my first fanfiction and I would like comments. Thank You!
After they changed into cleaner and more comfortable clothes, Ginny came into Harry's bedroom shutting the door behind her. Harry had the lights off and the blinds shut as his sunglasses were now lying on his bedside table. He laid on his bed in a tee shirt and black cotton pants as he stared at the ceiling waiting for her. She had to admit he looked incredibly handsome without his glasses. It seemed that his quidditch accident had made his eyes even more sparkling, radiant, and divine than she could ever imagine. She could see that even in the dark. "Hey" he whispered as he turned to her. Patting the place on the bed next to him. Ginny sat down next to him in her tank top and red cotton pants. She self-consciously began to comb her long hair with her fingers as Harry propped up some pillows for both of them to lean against. He sat comfortably as Ginny began to show signs of nervousness. "What's wrong?" he said as he looked deeply into her eyes and stroked her face."Nothing, nothing at all."she said.She sighed in relief as she took his hand and crawled next to him. His room was cast in a blueish glow from the moon shining through the spaces in the blinds. His walls were covered in posters and pictures of friends and family. Ginny found his room to be rather comfortable and safe. She liked the feeling very much as she leaned over on Harry's shoulder, hands still entwined together. He wrapped his other arm around her shoulder pulling her closed. "So here we are," he said. "Yup" "You think anybody even realized we're gone?" "I hope not" she said cuddling with him to get his warmth. "Why do you say that?" he asked. "Cause I love you and I don't want to be forced away from you anymore." Immediately she began to regret the sentence she just said. Of course she meant every word of it, but what if Harry thought she was a lovesick puppy or worse? What if he didn't love her back? "What? You, you love me?" he said rather surprised. She looked up into his eyes. They were like pools she could sink and drown in. "Yes Harry. I love you. More than anything," she said blushing red to match her hair. She looked away to hide her embarrassed state. "I can't believe I just said that. I really am a Gryffindor then," she thought. Suddenly she felt his warm hand leave hers as it reached to gently turn her chin so she was looking at him. "I love you too Ginny. More than what's probably healthy. I love you. I've wanted to say that for so long. I love you. I love you. I lo." Their lips meeting in a soft sensual kiss breaking off his words.
When she pulled back his eyes were still closed and a small smile crept on his face. He was in heaven and will probably never be able to come down to earth. He opened his eyes and thought, "She has the most gorgeous honey colored eyes I have ever seen. I hope she knows how much I love her and how amazing she is. Just seeing her smile and hearing her laugh makes me want to grab her and kiss her senseless. The way her hair shines in the sun makes my blood boil and knees shake. I've never loved anyone like I love her." "You really feel that way?" Ginny asked. "What?" "That stuff about my hair and smile and that." Harry blushed and noticed he must have thought out loud. "I meant it all," he said nervously, unsure of what to do. There was a certain longing, desire, and adoration in her eyes as she looked at him. In a blink of an eye she jumped on him and kissed him for all she was worth. He gasped in surprised but soon closed his eyes and wrapped his arms around her pulling her into him. Her hands went into his hair, running through his soft black locks seductively as her tongue danced with his. Their breaths mingled together as their lips moved and pressed together in rhythm. He nibbled on her bottom lip, stirring a soft moan from her. Her hands moved down his chest, rubbing up and down, teasing his nipples through his tee shirt. They broke away breathless. He was lying on his back with Ginny on top of him. Harry didn't even know how they got into that position. "Whoa! Nobody has ever kissed me like that before. Maybe I should think out loud more often." Ginny giggled and said, "Only if you think about me." "Oh how could I not," he said as he rolled over on top of her and kissed her passionately, determined to show his love.~Later around midnight~ "Geeze, How could Ginny and Harry leave us to do all the work and cleaning? Where are they anyway?" George asked curiously with Fred, Ron, and Hermione by his side in the now spotless kitchen. "I don't know," said Hermione. "Oh No," said Ron as he bolted up the stairs. He was about to burst through Harry's door when Fred dragged him away from it by the arm. "What are you doing?" Fred asked. "Ginny's in there. Probably being shagged by Harry" Ron said. "About time for that boy to get a woman," George said. "How can you support this?" "Why aren't you? Personally I think Harry's great for Ginny. He's a perfect gentleman," Hermione said. "You're siding with them?" "Yes" she said with her hands on her hips. "If Harry is such a gentleman, why is he shagging my sister?" "Doesn't sound like they're doing anything," Fred said with his ears at the door. "Silencing charm," he said matter-of-factly. Fred cracked the door slightly so everyone could look. "They're sleeping," Fred said looking at Harry and Ginny draped in blankets and sheets. "They could have done it awhile ago and now slept," Ron said. "They don't have the newly-shagged look," said George. "newly-shagged look?" Hermione said. "Yeah, 1st all their clothes are on, 2nd their breathing would be deeper, 3rd their hair is not messed up enough, and 4th their skin is not flushed and sweaty," George said. "I'm not going to even ask how you know this," Ron said. "We do have wives you know," George said. "Then why are you here and not with them," Hermione said. "Something about them wanting to be alone for some girl time," Fred said. "I can see why. You guys being their husbands and all," Ron said. "Shhhh, They're waking up," said Fred. Ginny stirred next to Harry, wiggling to find comfort. "Ginny, are you having trouble sleeping?" Harry whispered with his eyes closed. "Yeah," she whispered. "Harry rolled closer to her and scooped her body into his arms and then pulled her back slightly on top of him. She draped her arm over his chest and placed her head in the crook of his neck between his shoulder and head. His hand ran up and down her back soothingly. "Better?" he asked. "Much. I love you Harry," she whispered kissing his jaw line. "I love you too Ginny," he said as he kissed her forehead. They did all this with their eyes closed. Outside in the hall George said, "If that doesn't convince you Harry is perfect for Ginny I don't what will." Fred and George apparated with a small pop as Ron sighed and said, "Harry is a good bloke. I guess I can grow to like the idea of them together." "I knew you would come around," Hermione said as she stood on her tiptoes to kiss him on the cheek lovingly. They too apparated home as Harry and Ginny slept comfortably together until morning. _________________ MY WAND: 12", Holly, Dragon
Holly is a powerful protective wood that good for use against evil, but it also represents dreams and fertility.
Your dragon's heartstring core makes your wand very effective in hexes.
(just alittle hard to read though, needed more paragraph breaks)
And just curious...how did fred survive...he kinda died _________________ The boy who lived marries the wrong girl.
The girl whom he loves can not be his.
Harry, and Hermione...shoulda been!
Thank you for all of your awesome comments. I will continue to write more fanfiction on the subject of Ginny && Harry. It took me about an hour to write that. _________________ MY WAND: 12", Holly, Dragon
Holly is a powerful protective wood that good for use against evil, but it also represents dreams and fertility.
Your dragon's heartstring core makes your wand very effective in hexes.
This is extraordinary. I LOVE your style of writing, and that was just the cutest thing! Awesome. Please inform us when you write some more fanfics. _________________ Draco Malfoy and *sniff...sob* Fred Weasly ♥
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