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Ch. 1
Teddy waved to Harry as the train pulled away from platform 9 3/4. Teddy Lupin was on his way to his 7th and final year at Hogwarts. He has his NEWT's this year,but he wasn't that concerned about them, he knows he can't get a career. He hated knowing too. He hated knowing he can't find a decent job in the Ministry or in the school.
At times he wondered how his father had managed life. Teddy never knew his father, but Harry had told him all about Remus Lupin. Harry had said Remus Lupin had died a heroic death like his mother. As he thought of his parents he had a very sad thought. Hadn't his parents died in the grounds of Hogwarts ? He might have been stepping over the place where his dad died without noticing. What if Remus had died under the tree Teddy sat at. The thought sent shivers through out his body. He had never thought about his parents so deeply before and he closed his eyes picturing their faces in his mind from the pictures he'd seen of them.
The Hogwarts Express was rapidly gaining speed and the fields were becoming blurry at his window. Teddy's compartment door had suddenly slid open and Teddy's eyes suddenly snapped open to see his visitor. It was a Lillia. She was in her 7th year too, and Teddy had always found her very nice. But today, as he looked into her blue eyes, he thought she looked like the most beautiful thing in the world. She was wearing her school robes already and her long,straight blond hair was hanging down to her waist. She had beautiful blue eyes and one of the best smiles in the world.
"Oh, sorry !" she said.
Teddy was about to say something but she had already went away. He slumped back and fell into a nightmare :
It was a full moon night. He had been looking for a job, but everybody forced him back home. Lillia was walking towards him.
"Teddy" she gasped as she pulls him into a hug.
They were getting ready to kiss, but then he started to transform.
"Run Lillia ! " Teddy said as he let go of her with his transformed paws.
Teddy woke up with a start. He could see the towers of Hogwarts from his window. He shook the dream out of his mind and changed.
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This is a really good opener to a story. I thought that Teddy wasn't a werewolf like his Dad, but he morphed like his Mom. I may be mistaken on that, but I thought I read that from an interview from JKR. However, this is fan-fic so it doesn't matter anyway.
You have my interest peaked and I will definitely read more. Keep on please.... _________________
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thanks for the comments guys. heres my next installment. its short because i didnt have much time. hope u enjoy and please comment.
Teddy woke up with a start. He could see the towers of Hogwarts from his window. He shook the dream out of his mind and changed into his school robes. The thoughts of his parents were overshadowed by his hunger. He stepped out of the train.
"Ted ! How er' you doin' Ted ? " Hagrid was running towards him.
Ted broke into a wide smile. It's good to be back, he thought to himself.
He greeted Hagrid happily, but Hagrid seemed to look worried.
"You all righ' their Ted ? " Hagrid asked, " You look pale."
Teddy waved off the question with his hand. He was looking at the moon. Two days till full moon, and Ted will be transforemd into a beast again.
Hagrid could tell what Ted was thinking, and he put a comforting hand on Ted's shoulder.
"Welcome to another year in Hogwarts.", announced, Flitwick, the Headmaster.
Ted wasn't looking up on the High Table though, he seemed to be looking around the Great Hall for Lillia. He has never felt so much desire for anyone else before. His eyes were sliding up and down the Ravenclaw table, but he couldn't seem to find her. He turned back, confused.
" Let the feast begin !", said Flitwick's sqeaky voice.
The platters filled themselves up with delicious, mouthwatering, piles of food. They had roast beef, roast chicken, baked potatoes and much more. Teddy quikly filled his plate up and started eating.
"Ted, how was your summer", Jack , his best freind asked him.
"Where the hell were you on the train?", Teddy asked, ignoring his question.
"I was in the compartment with the ladies", Jack said grinning happily.
Ted hung his head. A feeling of despair washed over him. He shouldn't love Lillia. If she loved him back it would destroy her. Nobody but Jack knew he was a werewolf in the whole school , and if she found out she'll avoid him.
" Are you trying out for the Quidditch Team this year" ,Jack said poking him with a fork.
"Yeah" Teddy said, feeling a lot happier. Teddy has been Seeker for the Gryfindor Quidditch Team since his 4th year here.
Teddy woke up with a start. His body was covered in cold sweat and he was panting. He just had another night mare, but he couldn't remember about what.
He got up and slid his feet into his slippers. It was the crack of dawn, but the moon was still visible through the Gryffindor Tower window.
One more night, Ted thought to himself.
Teddy was thinking about his life. He had no parents. He was a werewolf. He was an outcast. He couldn't get a career. He couldn't get a girl, because he didn't want to hurt her. All these thoughts were swimming in his brain, and for the first time in his whole life Teddy felt sorry for himself. He fell his face getting hot and a single tear fell from his left eye. He flicked away with his finger and went back to sleep.
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Teddy woke up the latest of all the boys in his dormitory. Damn,he thought , what time is it. Hr glance at his watch that told him it 8:00.
"Aw crap", he said, "classes begin at 8:30."
He washed and got dressed in hyper speed. With no time for breakfast he ran to his first class, which was Herbology. He glanced at his watch again, 8:28. As he stepped put he bumped into Lillia. Her books fell of her hand.
"I-Im sorry" he says.
Please tell me I'm not blushing, he thought to himself as his face got hot. He bent down and started helping her pick her books up.
"It's alright, where are you going next ? " she asked him when her books were picked up.
"Herbology", he said trying to sound casual.
"So am I" she said.
They started walking together. Teddy was surprised how comfortable he felt around her.
"So how's your day been" Teddy asked trying to spark up a conversation.
"Wellllllll, not much has happend considering it's only 8:30."
What a stupid question to ask, he thought to himself, we haven't even had 1st period. They got to the greenhouse at 8:40 and Professor Longbottom was not pleased. Teddy immediately partnered up with Jack.
"Today, we're going to separate normal leaves from Alihotsy leaves. Now who can tell me what an Alihotsy leaf is?"
Teddy loved Herbology, it was one of his favorite classes. He had no idea how he had a future in Herbology, but it was fun. Teddy raised his hand to answer the question.
"Yes, Teddy" Longbottom nodded to him.
"Can't it make you, like mad with fear ?" He said uncertainly.
"Yes it can, it will cause hysteria"
A few of the students stepped away from the pile of leaves.
"-but only if you eat it."
Everyone looked relieved as they began to work.
"Why were you late" Jack muttered to Ted
"Overslept", Ted said, still thinking about his conversation with Lillia.
"Liar"
"What ?"
"You didn't oversleep"
"Yeah I did"
"Do you have any idea how it looked when you walked in with her" Jack asked grinning
"Shut up"
"Ask her out"
"To where"
"Hogemade"
"No"
"Why"
"Shut up"
"I'll as her out then" Jack said walking toward her.
"NO"
"Then you go"
"No, and thats my final word" Teddy said, throughly annoyed with him.
thanks for the comments guys, here's more. the more u critique me, the better i'll right
After Herbology Jack and Ted walked together to Hagrid's hut for Care for Magical Creatures.
"Al righ' gather 'round 'ere he grunted as the class filed in. Hagrid looked very excited.
Hagrid left the class with an air of suspicion as he walked into the forest.
"I hope he doesn't bring another creature that wants to kill us" Jack muttered into Ted's ear.
Ted knew what jack meant. Last year their had been quite a few close shaves. Like this one time Hagrid set and army of redcaps on them and it was total chaos. Hagrid later told Ted that he thought they were cute. But today seemed like an ordinary lesson when Hagrid came back with a unicorn.
"This is a' unicorn" he said looking at the creature proudly.
The unicorn padded the grounds nervously and Ted thought it was the most beautiful creature in the world. It had a pearly white horn extending a few feet on his forehead. His mane was white like his body, but not just any kind of white, it was the kind of white that glowed beautifully. The class went by fast. They petted the unicorn and Hagrid showed how to take of one. Pretty soon, it was 6:00 and Teddy was making his way to the hospital wing. Tonight was full moon, and Teddy had to take his potion. The Wolfsbane Potion allows him to keep his human mind while he's a werewolf.
"Ah yes Teddy, your potion is sitting on my desk." Madam Pomfery said as Teddy arrived.
Teddy gulped the potion in at once. He had gotten used to the horrible taste. Then the matron escorted him to the South Tower, the one over the Great Lake. This is the place where Teddy transformed and stayed every full moon night at Hogwarts.
He sat himself down on the chair by the window as the matron left. It was a beautiful day. On any other night him and Jack would have been walking on the grounds probably visiting Hagrid. Tonight, however, was no ordinary night. He dreaded full moon nights because a werewolf transformation was very,very painful. As he gazed at the sun setting, his thoughts came back to Lillia.
Should I ask her out, he thought to himself, no I'm a stinking werewolf.
The full moon was finally out. Teddy felt himself changing. The pain was intense, he roared in pain, but it was over in a matter of seconds. The potion,of course allowed him to keep his human mind. Now he thought of Lillia as a werewolf. Teddy looked down at his paws, then he looked at his reflection as a werewolf, and he howled sadly into the night before he fell asleep.
That's how Teddy's first day ended. Several weeks had passed since that first day before he once again found himself in a one-one conversation with Lillia. This time it was in the Quidditch Field. Teddy had easily been made the Gryffindor Seeker once again. They were getting prepared to play their 2nd match with was with Hufflepuff.
Josh Burlander, the captain was just finished giving last minute tips and that's when Ted and Lillia walked into each other again. Ted was getting ready to march into the filed, but he had forgotten his gloves back in the locker rooms, so he went back to get them and unexpectedly walked into Lillia.
"Oh, hello" Ted said nervously.
"Hey Ted" she said blushing clearly.
Their was an awkward silence.
"Well good luck" she quickly shuffled away.
Ted made his way back to field thinking hard. Lillia was apparently a lot shyer than she had been in the first day. She even blushed. That's what he was thinking to his way back to the field. Teddy felt some hope in him. Maybe he did have a chance, he thought to himself. That's when he remembered he had forgotten to get his gloves, and he made his way back to the locker rooms with a small grin on his face.
this entry is very short. i didn't get enough time,sorry. thanks for the comments. here goes
Teddy played well in the Quidditch Match. The final score was 210-20, Gryffindor. The Gryffindors were partying in the common room, but Teddy wouldn't be at the party. Teddy was once again on the South Tower as a werewolf, but today he didn't howl sadly into the night. He let out a very happy call to the night. His call was answered by many wolves roaming the mountains in the distance.
Teddy woke up the next day in the tower. He had a weird feeling in his stomach. Last night he had thought about asking Lillia out for the Hogesmade weekend next week. You really should if you love her, said a voice in his head. Another voice in his head said, You will ruin her if she finds out what you are. Teddy stuffed his head into his hands, confused.
******
Breakfast that morning was the same as always. Teddy was piling sausages on his plate while Jack was flirting with someone in Hufflepuff.
"Jack" Ted said, poking him with a fork.
"What" he said turning his head away from the girl.
"I've been thinking"
"What"
"About what you said the first day of term"
"How the hell should i remember what I said the first day of term" Jack said looking annoyed.
"About me and Lillia"
"Oh yeah I remember"
"So"
"So ,what"
"Should I ask her"
"You don't have a chance" Jack said jokingly.
Teddy got up and walked to the Ravenclaw table. He was nervous, but it's now or never. Actually I could ask her later, Ted thought,No I'm gonna ask now. He walked right up to Lillia who was talking to a friend.
"Er- Lillia"
She turned her head. She started blushing at the sight of him. Damn she's so beautiful, Ted thought to himself. He was blushing to.
"Oh, good morning" she said shyly.
"I was wondering if-if you finished that essay for Herbology."
"Um no" she said looking confused.
"Oh okay" Ted said nervously.
He turned around and started walking away. Damn I blew it,he thought. Something made him turn back again though. He was, again, walking to the Ravenclaw table where Lillia sat.
She seemed to be waiting for him.
"Er- Lillia"
"Yes"
"Would you like to go to Hogesmade with me" Ted said in hyper speed. There he had done it. A feeling of accomplishment spread into his body, but the answer was still to come.
"Um- what, I didn't catch that", she said confused.
Ted had no idea he would have to ask her again. He became nervous again.
"Would you like to go to Hogesmade with me" he said as clearly as he could.
"You mean on a date" she said, her face was pink.
"No- I mean- no-yes" Teddy stuttered.
"Yes"
"What"
"I said yes"
"Really"
"Shut up Ted" she said poking him with her for, "I said yes."
Ted broke into a grin.
"Thanks"
"What took you so long"
"What"
"I've been hoping you would ask" she said smiling.
Teddy felt like the luckiest kid on Earth. She said yes. He hadn't been expecting it.
Wow, I really like your story. Keep up the good work. I want to find out more how well Ted and Lillia get along. _________________
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hey guys. short entry again.
this part changes the story a lot and it can be edited. this part dosen't have to be part of the story. and if you guys don't like it i could make it different. just tell me
Dear Harry,
How have you been ?How's Ginny? Things in Hogwarts are going fine. Albus, Lily and James are waiting for the holidays eagerly so they can come visit you all. The semester is almost over, and I just wanted you to know that I really want to stay in Hogwarts over Christmas Holidays.Jack and I have some plans. Say Hi to Ron and Hermione for me and Merry Christmas
From,
Teddy Lupin
Harry read the letter a few times and then put it aside. He go out some parchment and starting writing another letter.
Hey Ted,
It's good to know that things are fine over there even if they aren't over here. Read this carefully Ted, because we have some trouble going on. Me, Ron, Hermione, and Ginny are going into hiding. I can't tell you where. It seems that a handful of Voldemort's old supporters are forming a little gang and going all around the country causing trouble. Tell the kids they can't come back for the holidays. Whatever you do, don't write back. You guys are safe in Hogwarts for now. I am sending you the Marauder's Map, just in case. Use it in case of an emergency. Keep the Hedwig with you.
Merry Christmas,
Harry Potter
Harry tied the letter on one of Hedwig's leg. Just like Harry's old Hedwig, his new Hedwig was a snowy white owl. The owl took off. As Harry watched the owl leave he thought of Teddy. Teddy and Harry were very alike. They both played Seeker for the same house. Both of them had no parents. Their parents were killed by Dark Wizards.
Harry said a little small prayer for all his children and his godchild before sitting back down. Hedwig had flew away from his view. Harry stuffed his hands into his pockets and started thinking about his own life. Life hadn't been to nice to Harry ever since that Halloween Night when his parents were murdered.
******
Teddy woke up to find Hedwig on his bedside.
"Hey, Hedwig" he greeted the owl as he untied the letter.
Teddy read the letter slowly. He re-read it a few time before dropping it.Then he put the Marauder's Map enclosed in the letter safely in his trunk. It seemed like all of his happiness from the last day's events were sucked out. He punched his pillow angrily. The thought of Death Eaters roaming the country made him very angry. If they come here, I'll kill them, Teddy said to himself in his mind. They killed my parents and I'll kill them, he thought again. Teddy was desperate for revenge. Anger boiled inside him.
After calming himself down Teddy got washed and went into the Great Hall for breakfast. The smell of food made him hungrier than he already was and he started eating in full speed.
"Teddy" Jack said elbowing him.
"What" Teddy answered in between mouthfuls.
"Go with her"
"Who"
"Lillia"
Teddy jumped up in shock. All the anger in him made him forget about him and Lillia.
"Go eat with her" he muttered.
"Okay, but you should read this" he said handing Harry's letter to Jack.
Jack has every right to know what's going on, Teddy thought walking towards the Ravenclaw Table. Once again a nervous feeling swept over him as he saw Lillia. She was talking to her friend. As he arrived, he could see they were bent over a copy of the Daily Prophet.
Teddy read the article
VOLDEMORT SUPPORTERS ATTACK
London- Death Eater committed at least 10 murders-
Teddy ripped his eyes away from the article. 10 murders in one day, these guys are crazy, Teddy thought. He tapped Lillia on the shoulder. She turned around and smiled at the sight of him. Teddy was blushing again.
"Morning", she said.
"Hi" Ted answered.
"Sit down"
"What"
"Sit down"
"Where"
"C'mon Ted you have to get used to this" she said scooting over to give him room.
Teddy sat. He had never been this close to Lillia before. He was looking at her. She was giving him such a cute smile that he couldn't resist wanting to kiss her. He leaned forward. All the thought about the Death Eaters were washed away. She leaned forward too. At least 20 people were watching, but Teddy and Lillia didn't seem to care. Their lips met. It was the best Teddy felt in his life and he didn't want it to end. He could here people around muttering, but he didn't care.
Cool. And another adventure commences. Keep up the good work. I'm intrigued. I hope you keep this in your story. _________________
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