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Cedric Diggory
Joined: Mar 3, 2008
Posts: 2399
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 Posted: April 24, 2008 7:43 pm Post subject: The Kiss. (Poem.) |
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I know its not the best. But I try, so all appreciation is welcome.
Harry had to do it.
He had to.
He didnt know when.
He didnt know what time.
He didnt know what place.
But he knew he had to do it.
He saw her.
The love of his life.
It was his time.
It was the time for it.
Right now.
Harry ran up.
He followed through..
He ran up.. And...
Harry Kissed her..
Harry kissed Ginny..
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Last edited by Cedric Diggory on May 18, 2008 8:02 pm; edited 1 time in total |
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FWFreedomfighter
Joined: Dec 23, 2007
Location: Crying. Oh Uncle Collace! R.I.P. I will miss you.
Posts: 2980
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| Posted: April 26, 2008 3:46 pm Post subject: |
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it's not bad.... better than i would've done, i'll tell you that much
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I will learn to love again,
but I will stand a Broken Man.
P.S. I HATE LOLLIPOP!!!!!!
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FirstStrikeForce
Joined: May 3, 2008
Location: Australia
Posts: 625
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| Posted: May 11, 2008 5:04 am Post subject: |
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Yes! Thank you Cedric for understanding Harry/Ginny, whoopieee!
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Huge Harry/Ginny fan!
Ginny For The Win!
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beef.
Joined: May 18, 2008
Location: Look behind you.
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| Posted: May 18, 2008 8:01 pm Post subject: |
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Good job! Like FW said, it's way better than any poem I've ever written. I'm a terrible poet. ^_^
Just one thing. He followed threw should be He followed through.
=]
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FirstStrikeForce
Joined: May 3, 2008
Location: Australia
Posts: 625
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| Posted: May 18, 2008 9:10 pm Post subject: |
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^Pshaw... spelling spelling spelling..
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Ginny For The Win!
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