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Wacky Macky
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PostPosted: August 28, 2007 8:22 am    Post subject: Love Hate Relations-Draco/Hermione(chapter 7 posted) Reply with quote

Before I start, I'd like to say I'm not a Draco/Hermione shipper, but I find them very fun to write about. Anyway, here ya go. Chapter 1.

-------------------------------AND IT BEGINS-------------------------------

Hermione Granger woke up, thick under her duvet at Hogwart's... her roommates were still snoring.

16 years old and I can't even bloody sleep in... She scolded herself, swinging her feet out from under the covers and getting out of bed. She tiptoed to the door and fumbled down the stairs to the Gryffindor commonroom. There was no one down here, as usual for 6 AM.

She took her usual chair, spreading out a bit of homework on the table in front of her.

"Transfiguration, Charms, History of Magic, what to do first..." She mumbled to herself, she had a bad habit of talking to herself when she was alone. "Transfiguration." She decided, looking awkwardly at the block of silver that she was supposed to turn to gold. "How in the world am I going to do this..." She sighed, normally things like this were so easy for her, but today everything seemed different. She could barely think straight.

She threw the silver block back into her bag along with all of her other supplies, not needing to bother with it now.

"Maybe breakfast will help," She grumbled, throwing her bag into the chair and jumping out of the portrait. She figured she wouldn't find anyone mildly interesting in the Great Hall, but boy was she wrong.
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PostPosted: August 28, 2007 9:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

u gotta entice ur readers babe... thts hardly a cliff hanger-its barely a teaser. give us sumthing to crave for more Razz i got curious cos i like ur wrk and i wanted to see wat u cud do with this angle (draco-hermoine) neways too early to say but since its u im sure its quite promising. get goin girl write more! Smile
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PostPosted: August 28, 2007 10:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

nice job. Very Happy
i love dramione!
please update.
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PostPosted: August 28, 2007 1:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

bitterhope wrote:
u gotta entice ur readers babe... thts hardly a cliff hanger-its barely a teaser. give us sumthing to crave for more Razz i got curious cos i like ur wrk and i wanted to see wat u cud do with this angle (draco-hermoine) neways too early to say but since its u im sure its quite promising. get goin girl write more! Smile


lol... too early to tell eh? well i didn't wanna do too much of a cliff-hanger for the first chapter, so i went with something mildly simple but it still gets you wondering what's gonna happen Wink
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PostPosted: August 28, 2007 1:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

yeah... thts why i keep comin back to this forum evry half hour to see if u updated...
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PostPosted: August 28, 2007 2:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Draco Malfoy sat in the deserted Great Hall, the first one down for breakfast... he was used to this, his father had always made him wake up early, even on Saturdays, it was one of his many bad habits that he wished he could poof away. Footsteps startled him, he jumped and looked up from his eggs, trying hard to see the girl from across the long room.

Granger... His mind practically sneered at him, telling him to forget the food, attack the girl, but he was too hungry... Granger would be left alone, at least for today.

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Hermione walked into the Great Hall, noticing only one other person in the entire room-Draco Malfoy. She ignored his presence, as she always tried to do, and walked to the Gryffindor table, getting her breakfast unphased by anything around her. She ate a couple peices of toast and got up, not even bothering to clean up her place. She was back in the Gryffindor commonroom in minutes, and surprisingly there were several people awake now, including Ginny. Hermione walked over, glad to see a familiar face this morning.

"Hey!" She walked up behind her.

"Herms! Hey! I was surprised, didn't see you down here doing homework." She laughed lightly, sitting on the arm of a chair. "Where were you?"

"Oh... I went downstairs to get some breakfast... Malfoy was down there though, didn't really feel like staying much." She sighed and looked at the floor, her stomach still growling, she now wished that Malfoy wouldn't have kept her from eating a real and filling breakfast. "I wish I would've now." She added, feeling her stomach grumble. Ginny looked at her.

"Well, I'm a bit hungry, we could go down there again and there'll probably be more people now... you won't have to be alone in the room with Malferret." Hermione chuckled, they were never going to let down that incident with Mad-Eye Moody in 4th year... Ginny and Ron talked about it all the time... and of course, it never got old.

"Sounds good." She smiled, linking arms with Ginny, and they walked back down to the now crowded Great Hall.
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PostPosted: August 28, 2007 3:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Smile nice... actually i gotta admit u kno there is sumthing to this angle... no 2 ppl can hate each other so much without some chemistry being there... biggest example buffy and spike from buffy the vampire slayer... neways lets see wat happens next *rubs hands gleefully with maniacal look in eyes*
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PostPosted: August 28, 2007 3:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

lol...

i'll probably post again later today.
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PostPosted: August 28, 2007 4:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

good work! Very Happy
please continue.
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PostPosted: August 28, 2007 8:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The day passed in a blur... before Hermione knew it it was 6 pm. Her head hurt, and she was lying in her bed... why had her mind been causing her so much trouble today? She sighed, looking to the door... no one had come to see her since lunch, when she mysteriously passed out in the Great Hall... right in her pea soup. She probably would have drowned if Ginny didn't notice she had passed out...

She never went to the Hospital Wing, they never thought anything was wrong, they just brought her to her room for some undisturbed sleep... even though that was not what she needed in the least. She knew what was happening to her, even though no one else did. The Muggle doctors had ensured her the surgery would make it impossible for it to happen again, that her brain would be at it's full peak for the rest of her life, and it had only been 4 years... she was already being attacked from the inside again.

She couldn't think, she could barely breathe... knowing that it was back was killing her inside... and it would be killing her a lot more soon.
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PostPosted: August 29, 2007 6:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

ilovedan38 wrote:
nice job. Very Happy
i love dramione!
please update.


you read DRACO/HERMIONE fanfic, by hOuSeLf, don't you? I've only stated likeing draco/hermione since I read that....so good, and they won't even post..*shakes head*

oh, LunaRocksTheRadishes, I have failed to find a fanfic of yours so far that I didn't like, and this continues it. Please update this, and your others too
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PostPosted: August 29, 2007 2:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i'll try Smile
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PostPosted: August 29, 2007 3:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

wat was it??? does she hav a tumor or sumthing??? cant wizards heal stuff like tht??? jus a tawt wat if wizards get cancer or tumors etc cud they jus wave a wand and heal it???
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PostPosted: August 29, 2007 4:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This is soooo cool.
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PostPosted: August 29, 2007 6:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

bitterhope wrote:
wat was it??? does she hav a tumor or sumthing??? cant wizards heal stuff like tht??? jus a tawt wat if wizards get cancer or tumors etc cud they jus wave a wand and heal it???


it's not a tumor... you'll see Very Happy
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PostPosted: August 29, 2007 7:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Lovesickness? Cancer? Disease? Plauge? Virus? Lyme Disease? Malaria? West Nile? Waterlogged Brain? Abcessed Tooth? Infected Abcessed Tooth?

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this is interesting.
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PostPosted: August 29, 2007 7:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

haha...

no, none of those. i don't even think it's a real disease... but oh well, i made it up Very Happy
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PostPosted: August 30, 2007 1:58 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Draco Malfoy was quiet in his room... he was remembering an incident at lunch, with a certain Gryffindor. What was it about her that he hated so much? Did he really hate her at all?

In the back of his mind he wondered if she was alright, if she had been hurt, what was going on. He shook it off immediately, remembering that Malfoys don't feel, and that he wasn't going to be an exception... especially not to a Mudblood.

So why wouldn't she get out of his head? Why was she still there, the picture clear of Potter carrying her out of the Great Hall... why did he care so much? He went over the incident time and time again in his mind, wondering if it would be possible to break into the Gryffindor commonroom to see her... but he scolded himself, that was impossible, as it was the same to be with her... or even to feel anything about her. Hermione Granger was not a part of him, they were total opposites, and he hated her with every fiber of his being, no matter what his mind was telling him. He closed his eyes, trying to filter out the image of her... ever image of her he had acquired in his memory in the last six years. The day their eyes met in the prefect's compartment, the time that she had laughed at him being turned into a ferret in 4th year, it all made so much more sense to him now. She hated him, she always had, and he hated her too... so there was nothing to fret about, as long as he kept himself on track... as long as he hated her, everything would be fine.

Of course, he didn't know if the fact that he was thinking about her at all was anywhere near hateful.
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PostPosted: August 30, 2007 6:05 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

This is good stuff! Keep it coming Smile
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PostPosted: August 30, 2007 7:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

More! Wow, one chapter to how Malfoy feels about Hermione. Nice.
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PostPosted: August 30, 2007 7:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Duelingwands wrote:
More! Wow, one chapter to how Malfoy feels about Hermione. Nice.


yeah I like that too. It really shows us in clear the battle he has going on with himself. Write more please, I love this!!
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PostPosted: August 30, 2007 9:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Cool, but tere's too much Draco/Hermione fanfics.
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Hermione heard the door click, she was much too weak to even open her eyes and check who it was. She heard footsteps, and pressure increasing on the side of her bed - someone had sat down. She heard Ginny's voice, but she was still unable to open her eyes. Her head was hurting, even worse than it had last time.

"Herms? You alright?" She asked, concern showing in her voice. When Hermione didn't reply, panic was evident. "Herms?!" Hermione's eyes fluttered open slightly, her head hurting more every second.

"Ginny - go get help... I'm not well." She whispered, trying hard to stay awake. Ginny's eyes were wide, her red hair dishevelled all over her face, she had obviously been panicking, even for the few seconds that had passed since she came in. "Go," Hermione whispered again, she needed Ginny to leave her side desperately, even if Ginny didn't want to.

"Herms?! Are you oka-"

"Go!" Hermione screamed in a whisper, desperate for Ginny to not be so stubborn for once. "Please." Everything went black again as she passed out, all the exertion from simply keeping her eyes open and talking being too much for her.
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