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Childrens Of The Legend-The Story Of Albus Severus

 
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joniboni
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PostPosted: August 25, 2007 3:37 pm    Post subject: Childrens Of The Legend-The Story Of Albus Severus Reply with quote

Hey this is Joniboni, the creator of between dreams and reality with a new story! This time its next generation Hogwarts. This time its about the childrens of the legend.
Here's the first chapter, please comment!


Albus Severus is no little kid anymore. He is a now a 5th grade powerfull wizard, that has just discovered something more important than all the spells of the world...Girls

Chapter 1: Ladies And Gentlemens

Albus was looking up at the dark sky thinking about her. The beautiful girl he had met yesterday. Wendy. He thought about her and a smile appeared on his mouth. He was standing out side the castle, thinking those thoughts when somebody came:
"Well, if it isn't Aldumb Smellyjuice! What are you doing out here? Oh i know, you're thinking about that mudblood right!" Albus heard several people laughing. He turned around and looked into the eyes of Scorpius Mafoy and his crew.
"Shut up Malfoy!" Albus said and drew his wand. "Dont call her that, you pathetic asshoul!" Malfoy looked angry and he also drew his wand.
"How dare you!" Malfoy started. "CONFRIN..."
"Expelliarmus!" A male voice said, and Malfoys wand flew out of his hand. Albus looked around and saw his older brother James standing with his wand looking angry. Malfoys crew stopped laughing, and looked scared at James.
"Get out of here scumbags!" James said to the scared crew, and then they fleed. Malfoy looked angry at James and Albus and then he left.
"Thanks..." Albus said.
"Hey" James started. "What do you got brothers for?" They both laughed.
"So, what's with that Malfoy guy?" James asked Albus.
"Well, its just like dad said. He's just as annoying as Draco, you know Scorpius's father..." James nodded. "There both a couple of ass hou..." He was interrupted when a cold voice said:
"What are you guys doing out here in the middle of the night?" They saw that Argus Filch was standing next to Madam Norris looking at them.
"Get in your domitries, now!" He shouted, and they hurried up to the common room.

End of chapter 1, what do you think?
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Icefire
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PostPosted: August 25, 2007 5:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I hope you have a plot for this cause there have been so many of these fanfics, but really, just a friendly warning.

I really like it, please write more Wink
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joniboni
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PostPosted: August 26, 2007 6:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Chapter 2:
Lions and tigers come running

Albus woke up next day in the boys room. It was early in the morning. He looked around and saw his friend Hugo sleeping and snoring out loud. Albus got out of bed and went down to the common room. He sat down in a nearby chair and took a couple of beans. He was about to fall asleep again, when a loud noice woke him up. The window was open and a owl had just landed next to him.
"Hey little fella..." Albus said sounding sleepy. "What are you doing here?" The owl was holding a little letter, and Albus took it. On the outside of the letter there was written:
To Albus. S Potter
There was not written who the sender was, and Albus thought it was a little weird. He opened the letter, and a piece of paper was down there. He took it, and was about to read, when he realised that the paper was blank. He thought about it for a while, then he felt asleep.

Albus woke up. There was alot of voices. Girl voices. They were laughing. Albus realised that he had slept in the common room, and he also found out why they were laughing. He was only wearing underpants.
"Damn!" Albus said, and he ran up in the boys room with the blank piece of paper.

After breakfest Albus told Hugo about the blank piece of paper.
"Weird..." Hugo said, still a little sleepy.
"Yeah...It could be a..." Albus stopped talking when he saw her. Windy. She was just as beautiful as the first time he had met her. Hugo started laughing.
"What?" Albus asked him.
"You like her, dont you!" Hugo said.
"Shut up" Albus said and went over to Windy. She noticed him and smiled.
"Hey" Albus said.
"Hey" she answered, and then there was a long akward silence. Then suddently Windy said:
"What's that?" She pointed at the paper.
"Oh!" Albus started. "An owl gave it to me this morning...There's nothing written on it..."
"Hmm..." Windy said and drew her wand. "Let me just try this...Show me your secrets!" Then suddently small words appeared on the paper.
"I knew it..." She said smiling.
"Thanks!" Albus said, and then he read the small words:
Zeprenzo
-Use it if you are in danger, it will help!
"Zeprenzo..." Albus muttered. "It's some kind of spell..."
Windy looked seriously: "Who sent you this?"
Albus remembered: "I dont know...No name was written"
It could be a trap...But Albus's thoughts were interrupted when he felt Windy's lips against his. After some seconds, they released each other. Albus smiled at her.
"Come on! You promised me that we should Quidditch practice!" Hugo shouted at him.
"I have to go. See you..." He said at Windy, and she nodded.
He went over to Hugo who said: "I knew it!" Albus smiled and thought about what had just happened. This was the best day of his entire life.

End of chapter 2

What do you think???
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